wait isnt minato still hokage?

Ya got me interested pls write more

This story was great. I feel that Naruto will grow up to be a villain, being blamed for his mother destroying half the village, and being banished from the village to become evil and marrying Tayuya and becoming a Sound Shinobi, abandoning orange in favor of purple. . This was well done, I love the amazing detail into this. Keep up the good work! This is Super Villain Squadron signing out.

is this a one shot or is it going to be taken further?

Damn that was really dark, so much stuff happened and it was just the first chapter, oh kushina is definitely gonna kill both horizon and danzou when she is back, though I am pissed that she didn't kill them before she went to uzu, specially since danzou was the one that killed one of her friends, bit I guess her head was filled with pure naruto at the moment.
And daaaamn kushina really did a number on konoha, hah I would be surprised if seeing the village all destroyed and with that fucker minato dead not to mention sarutobi crippled at least for a while iwa will most likely invade, well at least I hope so since it will only bring more death and destruction to konoha.
But now that kushina is gone naruto is fresh meat for the wolves, but seeing how many loyal friends kushina had I can't see them ignoring or abandoning him unless they were threatened to do so, and even so I think some of them may try to take him away, or at least tell him the truth.
And damn to think all that shit that went down could have been avoided if kushina just gave birth to naruto on Kiri, what's more she should have taken her cousin and Tayuya with her but she did neither and here we are.
Damn I really hope naruto at least becomes one Badass motherfucker so he can have his revenge, not to mention he has kyuubi with him so she can tell him the truth about what happened instead of the huge pile of bullshit hiruzen may come up with.

No good man. Overdramatic. Too much unimportan talk. Too much nonsense unnecessary dead. I mean kasumi had rinnegan but only use ONE technique and die with little fight. And dont forget the innocent one..

You must seriously re evaluate your story my friend. Otherwise no one would even read to the third chapter

this is stupid but manageable stupid you know what im saying?

God damn this is so sad but so good at the same time.

Can't wait to see how it continues!

Keep Up The Good Work!

can't wait for the next chapter hope you continue

Honestly this fic makes no sense. You have Minato go batshit insane because Kushina wants to visit her relatives. Which is no real big deal, and should be easy for the Homage to arrange protection details for her. The rest was okay until the part where after the sealing you seemed to forget about Kushina's friends from the previous paragraph, all so none of them can help Kushina against Danzo's Root. Which is another thing if Danzo has that many Root shinobi then he should have no problem taking over the village. And ten you have Hiruzen just disappear with Naruto oy for him to keep Naruto hidden by lying to Kushina, who after hearing what happened to Naruto should have bluffed Hiruzen by saying either tell her her where her son is or she will slaughter the Sarutobi clan. After all you already show she is more powerful then Hiruzen, so its within her power. Then you go and make her a S class missing him by slaughtering all those people threw multiple villages. Also why kill Haruhi, it's unnecessary, also moronic that with how many seals she has on her house that any non Uzumaki can somehow undo her seals. And then the Scorpion doesn't take Tayuya back to the summoning realm to keep Tayuya safe, while it could then go on to find Kushina. I get you want to make a harem but there is much pointless drama that it's just gonna the folks off from reading this. I might read more in the future, but I'm not sure. Good luck in the future.

Same mob cliché bullshit, Really! Be creative for once.

Should divided into 2 chptr. 19k in one chptr its seems too long. Anyway look for your update.

The base idea of your story is good but I think you have so much plots for this fic that you have basically rushed everything.

You can take it easy. When writing your story's premise if you go a little bit more detailed it will be fine. You could have developed this chapter into 2-3 chapters easily.

Best of Luck for this fic in the future, may it get the attention that you wanted.

This is so fucking over dramatic it makes me cringe

Very interesting start.

Can't wait to see how it bites Hiruzen in the ass when they finally find Naruto.