not English

Hello,

you made a little mistake. Your chapter 5 english version of the story is in french :).

with all these mistakes and makes it very hard for people to read don't get me wrong it's a good story but if you have to take your time really think about your words what they're trying to mean it slows the story and makes it harder for people to read and like I said English is my first language Spanish is my second French is my third.

So did you accidentally upload the non english version and are you going to fix it so it is?

The English made series is in French, my friend

This isn't in English

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Another great chapter. Keep it up

Could you post it on ao3 or something? You did a great job but I could try and send you a better translation.

A very interesting story also where are the Spartans 4s or 3s most likely depends how long it's been since canon