Very good chapter
Keep writing.
Blessings and good health to you and your loved ones.

I'm sorry to hear you had a scare.
good chapter.

what I don't like is that jon is more worried that someone will discover that he is a targaryen if he has a dragon it is his strongest card if he wants to change the fate of the west he has to accept being a Targaryen and have one or more dragons at his disposal and with his warg ability he can better control the dragons that makes me silly I hope your family member better health and take good care of yourself I hope and you can upload the next chapter soon

Fantastic chapter; I'm curious if Jon will hatch the dragons using the body's of the Mountain and his men or he'll wait until he can rescue Nedpresuming he can.

great chapter; He looked forward to Jon's first great battle, I hope this will help him gain a certain reputation among the inhabitants of the river lands. although I personally hope that after the death of the Mountain, Jon will be forced to go to the capital to give his statement regarding his battle; that could also be used to get jon to take his sisters out of the capital, since Ned died, but don't forget that Jon should also bring ICE with him would be a good sign of loyalty to the Stark house.

Hello and thank you for this awaited update :)
The story is shaping up nicely. I hope will change his mind about hatching the dragons himself because the North will need them soon against the Others.

Seven dragons are awesome ! I wish John could awaken them! John is not a wolf ! He is a dragon on his father! The author, take this into account! And mate John with Ygritte or Vel? Are you serious? Damn it, not one kingdom will accept such a marriage! He needs to marry Dani or at least Margaret Tyrell! It will attract him at least soba. Margaret is not evil in itself, albeit a little manipulative, but not angry. John may even reveal himself to Olenna when he hatches the dragons and they grow up. He can grow them in Howland Reed Castle, there is a quiet place and there are no spies. And Reed is a friend of Ned Stark and knows the truth about John! About attracting Dani. You can give her either full memories or fragments of them. And the awakening of these memories can be done when she hatches her dragons, it will be interesting. Perhaps she will not repeat her mistakes and will not go crazy. And the author, if it's not difficult for you, can you answer the comments at the end of the chapter? there are not so many of them and you can answer) And the Chapter is good, I look forward to continuing! Think about at least Margaret, she fits all your parameters, and as a bonus, she was fully revealed as a character in the series, unlike the wild girls. And do not forget, not everyone read the books, many only watched the series. Until the next chapter! I really look forward to continuing!

i still think you should have had jon remind ned not to trust someone like the lannisters to behave with honour- and that bran should have reminded him that it was sansa who let cercei capture the starks.

this was a interesting read cant wait for the next chapter jon vs the moutian should be interesting cant wait please update as soon as you can please

Another good chapter.

In the end, it would be nice if Jon had dragons, even if only one, if he hatched now the dragon would be bigger than Daenerys's. On the other hand, it would be nice if in the end he could save Ned and the girls from the capital and head north to fortify it, for example, have Moat Catlin rebuilt.

Why didn't bran want to kill Barbry Dustin?

Author, if you have problems with imagination, why do you write about a three-Eyed Raven who knows the future and does not change the main events? There is no logic. For example I am sure that Ned can be saved.

I advise you to make the story logical. To do this put yourself in the place of other characters taking into account their characters

if you are not a creative person, then why do you write that John doesn't listen to the three-Eyed Raven? Why catch Brandon when you can just distract Him from climbing the wall?