Uhhhh soo now the erza ark

I’ve really enjoyed the story so far, I can’t wait to see where it goes! I like Selina a lot and think you did a good job crafting her character. Her backstory meshes well with Lucy’s (I can definitely see Layla taking in a dragon slayer kid if she found one of them) and the fact that they are both inexperienced fighters and learning together really adds to that sisterly bond. I also liked the fight with the Vanish Brothers, her deferring to Natsu was great for showing her more level headed nature.

I hope to see more of Wren and his relationship with Selina, each of the dragon slayer/exceed relationships is so different so I’m curious what theirs will be like.

I’m interested in how the revelation of Layla’s involvement with the dragon slayers will go down and how Selina will react. That’s the kind of character drama I live for lol

Awesome update :)

Luv it can’t wait for more updates ️️️️️️

There seems to be a problem with the upload.

I also suggest spacing between everything to make it more readable.