dear god this is cute and yet a lil creepy but so good

Our real Hero is lucky, he survived being stabbed and forced transmutation without the Omnitrix to regulate it.
Later he is saved and cared for by a Beautiful Damsel who is willing to give him her Unconditional Love.
He's lucky only comparatively, good things about being a Protagonist.

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*read last part of chapter*

Smooth Ben, real smooth. XD

Now this, a fully explained backstory to one of the most tragic characters. Formed and developed beautifully in a single chapter. Man why can't we see more of this. Great chapter man! Patience prevailed!

Next Chapter When?

keep up the great work i wonder does ben end up in the third grail war

I find it ... unnatural that Ben kills. I get it but I still see it wrong (maybe I'm still holding onto the Ben 10 basics).
The fight was fluid, the opponents put our hero in serious trouble. They did more damage to him in a single encounter than Vilgax did in one season although they did not collectively take even a quarter of all the damage Ben's recurring enemies face.

It is appreciated to have an acceptable introduction, most of the Fanfictions jump straight to the matter without giving further explanations.

yeah that dont make sense the omnitrix survived the big bang a universe destroying bomb and tons of other stuff best edit and have it broken and in repair mode cause i dont care how strong you are you cant stab with the force of the big bang also you forgot the omnitrix has a life saving function so that if the user were in life treating situation it would transform them into something that could survive it so a bit to much suspension of disbelief

And thus starts the Adventure of a Transylian. The Battle Against the Eccentric Group cost them their lives, but to Ben, or Frank, as we may call him now cost him a life into a journey in Apocrypha. I can see tidbits of Beauty and the Beast, considering if Frank actually did meet some locals and get frightened by his monstrous appearance. Though considering his Transylian nature, he can endure as much alongside his new companion, that be the Beauty.

A bit of mistakes on the last paragraph. And then it's fine.

Good Writing and have a good one!

Oof. Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work.

You should pay more attention to the size of the paragraphs, texts walls are a huge put off, like a real one, try to keep the paragraphs at a max of 5 lines (like the max). Nice vocab, not a lot of mistakes on grammar.

Alright, now that the boring part is over let’s get to the actual review:
-A long chapter without many events, you gave the backstory to what was going on with Ben (how old is he though?), invaded a museum, found a cult trying to summon the power of gods, which I can only translate to summoning servants as they are pseudo-divine beings... that or the counterforce but that is a while other can of worms.
-For a second there I though it was actual Quetzal Coatl and Asteiros, but I am happy that there is no (apparent) grail war in this one.
-I wonder, how will best girl react when Ben (because Azimuth) returns back to normal or just tells her he is not Frankenstein, not that I can see this ending as anything but a tragedy with best girl Blasted Tree-ing to oblivion.
-Now that I think about it, the review says that he founds himself somewhere he doesn’t know... so... Nasuverse or the past?
-Whatever the case, we will be watching your career with great interest.

A fight that will change Benjamin's fate forever. A heavy build up with Ben's loss from Kai and a new mystery heavily implied on Magicka. So you going for the Frank and the Bride of Frankenstein? I can see as Ben will venture throughout a new world with a companion on his side. Is his Omnitrix Default set on Transylian Species instead of Homo Sapien due to the strict conditions, change, or maybe just for the sake of Frann. We'll see...

Have a good one and hope you enjoy writing this!

This was pretty good. Waiting for more!