That was a great story! I couldn't stop reading it. I was entranced.

I like the end result and your great grandfather's experience. I can imagine a drunk seeing...something!

Good Job!

I really enjoyed reading this. Read very much like an episode, and everyone is very much in character - great job! I loved the reveal of the 'ghost'. This would work perfectly for a Halloween episode. :)

Nah- the bird puns are funny and this is a great, suspenseful mystery with a funny twist at the end-the clues are perfect and the characters are true to form. Happy writing and come back soon! -rg

This story was pretty great, I did not expect it to end like that.

Regret nothing ;) the bird puns were great.
Where I live we've got a ton of Canadian geese and they are MEAN if provoked, so I could totally see this happening. Loved Watts on the stakeout, nothing was gonna get past him!
This was cute, awesome job!

You've built an awesome mystery here and the truth is that I have no clue who it might be :) and that's the best part for me. I'll look forward to seeing it all come together next chapter!

I'm reading this in the dark and I'm almost as jumpy as Murdoch is...
This reads out like an episode, it's all too easy to get caught up in it!

This story is a great read so far, I'm excited to see what happens next.

Yay! So good to see you back! This a great start and I look forward to more.

Ah...the creepy house, Higgins and George having friendly friction...I can see the characters and hear the dialogue...you are right; just like a episode of the show. We have the murder...now on with the mystery! -rg

I just love the organized dysfunction that is the boys of Station House #4 :) Watts stealing Murdoch's catch phrase was hilarious.
An interesting start to the mystery! Looking forward to more.