You had somewhat interesting premise, but in the end the story had not met the expectations. A lot of weird decisions here and there. Sorry.

Yeah sorry dude, dropping this one. I utterly despise this stage of Bakugo. He’s nothing but an extremely narcissistic prick at this point in time of the story, and you give him the role of president? The guy who told a classmate to commit suicide? I have extreme doubt that people in 1-A wouldn’t put up more of a fuss about a guy constantly degrading others being class president. And then you make Deku a complete pushover? Where’s all the confidence from training from those big wigs? He should’ve gotten something out of that other than slight control of his quirk, surely!

As for the romance, I am sad that Momo will not be with Izuku, and am now depressed after knowing you will surely pair her up with Bakugo for his character development no doubt, unless you pull a sneaky and pair her up with somebody else, but the chances of that happening are slim to none. And now it’s too late to change your mind (but you’re too prideful for that either way) and change things up for the better, arguably. I’m dropping this story with a heavy heart.
I would say ‘Good luck’ but I really wouldn’t mean it.

when All Might grabbed Nomu's wrist you forgot to write Might in All Might
what's "above the DIN of the flames"? at the part where Iida catch Midoriya

Not a bad chapter, I just gotta ask why is Izuku so bad in this chapter, it's like he never received his training from All Might, Nighteye and Gran Torino. He shouldd have been able to blow away the first group of thugs with no problem. I I'm saying is your not having Izuku be consistent his capabilities. Also why not have Momo and Izuku together, you had it so they clicked very well during their hero class and was hoping to see that develop more Also yeah having Izuku give the class president role to Bakugo was just dumb. I mean Bakugo at this point of the story is more villian then hero, he should not represent the class as president. Also with his training Izuku should be more confident with what he acan do and should've had no doubt about trying to be the best class president he could be. Also is Shiguraki not going to have his disintegrate power since gave him the over powered acid balls? Or are the acid balls supposed to be a additional power give to him by All for One? I hope yo fix some of thee issues otherwise I'm afraid I can't come continue reading this. Which honestly I liked the set up with Izuku getting the extra training, but last chapter just didn't feel right and this chapter was just weird.

This chapter was absolutely EPIC! I eagerly await for more

You contracted yourself so many times in your “explanation”. Yes, Izuku was bowing down to bakugou by giving him the class representative role. Yes, bakugou was manhandling him without repurcussions. Yes, you were pandering to that character. If you’re trying to make him a decent person I get it. But you don’t reward a piece of coal. You put it through hell and failure for it to come out looking good. He’s a piece of shit as he is now. A piece of shit that represents the whole class... a piece of shit that’s getting rewarded for no reason while the main character of your story is reverting back to who he was before being trained by these behemoths. You can’t take a shit one chapter and then claim in the next one that you didn’t. The evidence is right there. I bet you anything in the world that your plan was to make bakugou grow through a girl. He starts liking someone so he starts “getting better”. Basing it on signs I’m guessing you’re gonna use Momo. I would say Ochako since you seem to like making the main character of your story suffer, but I think even you have more class than that.

If Momo is out, that means I’m out. Peace.

Yeah no I’m dropping this. Your response was dumb as hell and I was looking forward to Momo being involved. That and you keep having Izuku revert back to a spineless pushover. Where’s the guy who has been trained for months on how to use his quirk? Good luck I guess

Yeah great great

This laser nonsense is not a good use of OFA. You basically added a form of OFA that was impossible in previous users even though the way you described it they should have had access to. Because by the time that it reached Nana, the quirk should've accumulated enough power to start firing of energy beams. OFA is a physical enhancer that provides superhuman strength, agility, dexterity, speed, etc while having previous quirks imprint on it. Now if you have it turn out to be that Izuku has been using like say the 3rd holders quirk the whole time then that would make more sense in the context of OFA. But if not, then does that mean that the 10th older fires energy blasts? I know you'll never get that far in world building, but it ruins what OFA is going forward. You can't have physical enhancement quirk for generations suddenly switch to massive energy conversion to going back to physical enhancement

This was a great chapter and the USJ will be split into two more chapters is even better. I enjoyed all the changes you made. Honestly, I forgot that Izuku had finger lasers. I also liked how you had Izuku use OFA to accelerate his thought processing which I have not seen before. Keep up the great work and looking forward to the next update.

Awesome chapter, dude! You’re doing an amazing job making sure Izuku and the others react realistically to the situation, and the way you’re having them encounter just as many failures as setbacks as successes and opportunities is doing wonders for character development and a damn good story. Keep it up!

What!? No IzuMomo? What happened man, I was looking forward to that.

Are you keeping the girls Izuku gets with a secret? And how many will there be?

Great chapter. Looking forward to rest of USJ.