Percy's power scaling is way off while I understand why you have him more power the problem is the ability to control water in any form including blood you fail to realize how deadly that power is given you could cause someone's heart or brain to explode with that the moment you take away the no kill rule Percy becomes a monster who can kill faster than tomura can with a touch by reverse people's blood streams with the way you've set up Percy noumu would have died either with his exposed brain exploding or drowning on land

Man... I feel like you need to lay off the "kid" thing. Yes, Percy is older and considerably more mature, because of everything he went through more than anything. And yes, he took on a position of counselor and older brother to his class, but... He's middle aged...

It's a gailing, honestly. It doesn't come off like its supposed to, but rather awkward. And its not just because of how he's presented in the story, because despite being a student himself we all understand that you're working him more like a teacher in training than anything, someone that have lots to contribute, but lacks experience or knowledge in some specific areas. But even if he WERE a teacher/friend in full, it'd STILL be awkward to have him casually address people 4 years younger as kid.

to put things in perspective, as older as he was by the end of the books he made his last appearance at for now, he never addressed the younger campers like so, even though there are literal kids there, 8, 9, 10 year olds. I've also never did myself or seen anyone in my age group speak in such a way directly with a kid, teenage or younger, and I'm over 25. And some of these people I've mentioned are actual teachers, a martial instructor and a firefighter hahaha.

I don't want to throw any shade your way, this is an incredible minor thing to be complaining about in the grand scheme of things, but its just something I've had stewing inside for some time and finally remembered, by the end of the chapter, which is when I decide if I want to write a review or keep reading.

Anyway, with that piece said, I'd like to also say I've been enjoying a lot of your twists to this story. I don't know if I actually said in a review before, I think I did, but don't be reluctant in changing things up, your original plot changes are really interesting. I'm honestly really excited for when you're going to have an all original arc. So far you have been following canon, and using the time to focus on self/internal growth for Percy, which was good, but kept things fairly predictable overall. But you have been teasing now and about, especially with Poseidon's last words to Percy and then with Ibara's statement that there's something more in store... I'm super excited!

Anyhow, I'll get to the next chapter.

Awwww, this chapter was such an emotional hit on me... Truly, it doesn't matter how people may put the percabeth pair, after everything they went through, it's too hard not to wish them happiness and selfishly want them to be with no one else but each other. I was just warming up to the idea of Percy's possible pairings, and you threw me back. I'm happy you gave Annabeth a good, fulfilling life with a family of their own, even if my selfish fan heart feel a little (unreasonably) cheated.

This was a great way to give Percy closure though, I loved it. I'm very excited about his future, and in what ways you'll twist the canon of BNH/MHA and also Percy's canon power/fighting style, especially after losing his arm.

I feel like this chapter could be a little less cringy, what with Percy going comic book hero from the 80's and 90's there at the end, but I've enjoyed it a lot other than that. I would have liked Percy to stay as far away from emulating All Might as possible, that attack name was... Not cool.

Also, is Percy really going to be naming attacks now? I mean... He never did before, and he was already fighting from much earlier than coming to this future... On the other hand, he IS a hero comic book fan from in this, so it wouldn't be weird in that sense if he got on that vibe, what with his childhood dreams, memories and fantasies and the current Hero Culture which makes such things normal and not childish or awkward. I'm 50%/50% on that right now.

I like how you're breaking away from canon, but I felt like you could've dared more in the USJ episode. You've been doing good on that, so... Bring your own villains and plots to the fold man, don't be afraid to lose canon's storyline's clutch.

I love the way you’ve written this story.

Also, when Percy went up against Nomu that final push sounded very similar to the moment in G Gundam when Domon unlocked Super ModeThis hand of mine glows with an awesome power! Its burning grip tells me to defeat you! Take this: MY LOVE! MY ANGER! AND ALL OF MY SORROW! SHINING FINGER SWORD!”

I anxiously await updates on this story, cus it’s killer

I do like the story, but I wished there was an aftermath to Percy's little game. What everyone thought and witness.

Supa noice.

I binged this story and couldn't put it down till I caught up, it rapidly became one of my favorites, and can't wait for more, keep up the great work

Thanks for the chapter hope you update again liked the story

Percy is definitely OOC in this fic. I don't like that he is always involving himself with every character in their issues like its his problem. Yeah he can relate to it, but does he have to get involved everytime? The fact that he's only a few years older but he acts as if he's an old man giving life lessons doesnt feel right. I'd rather he be a teacher at school then rather then a classmate if he's gonna be so focused on motivating every student with a problem. Itd make more sense that way. The quality of the story is good but I'm not sure if Percy's background justifies his actions fully. Keep up the good work

Really enjoyed reading your story so far. I've been thinking about Percy and his arm based on your AN. While you say its important for his development, it didn't seem necessary for him to lose it. It would have made sense if you did it to limit his strength because he would have to get used to prosthetics. However, I don't think that's the case either as I dont see him struggling to use his new arm nor does it hinder his abilities, and you stated that his arm doesn't matter. So, other than for some sappy character development and new asthetics, doesnt seem like a legit trade off. Also why not at least attach back the arm? If he's only missing his hand that doesn't justify not attaching the arm right? That way, he'd keep as much of his body as possible with only a hand as a prosthetic, meaning he'd keep most of his strength. I dunno why they just throw away the arm saying its useless without the hand...
Itd be great if you could explain that in more detail. Otherwise, keep up the good work!~

Oh gosh I love this story. Infinitely glad that it hasn’t been abandoned. Though I’m wondering wether your going to give percy power over lightning and blood bending? Or is the last one too dark for this story?

Also Percy's power boost is kinda underwhelimng considering it came from a god

Btw if you try to make all for one take Percy's power just amp him don't cuz his power only works quirks and Percy doesn't have any

I wish the fic ended here and Percy serves as a motivation for the U.A. students cuz he actually died and went into the afterlife to his friends and family