the concept is interesting... though the combat needs work... good job overall couldn't wait for next chapter

Damn, can't wait for Emily to get her Aura unlocked. With how she can stand up to aura'ed fighters, she'll positively wipe the floor with em once she gets hers..

Velvet not Violet

Interesting with how Enily will fight against aura users. This means she has to be real stealthy to either knock them out or kill them as a straight up fight would be quite a challenge when her enemy is durable.

I do like the interaction with Summer and Corvo, is interesting to see that she has other sense that are enough to be used without her eyes. Wonder what will happen in the Dishonored world while Summer is there though and if anything comes up there. Currently it seems rather relaxing so far compared to the RWBY world with Emily. Still I hope to see some stealth sections in this and see some rather cunning assassinations for her targets if Emily gets any.

Anyway good job as always, I do like how the plot is progressing so far.

Corvo getting a taste of the bullshit called Aura.

Just wait until he finds out it makes people inhumanly strong.

Very, very cool. I like it!

Stabbing it in the eye? Okay it seems we have a definition of durable here. A Knife was able to kill a Death Stalker. The same Deathstalker that tanked .50 caliber Sniper Rifle rounds. I think your overhyping Dishonored here. Though her magics do at least give her advantage.

Team CFVY huh? An uncommon choice. I totally expected Emily to wake up in Salem's castle and her using her powers to escape back to civilization. And then get tangled up in the criminal underground as a temporary means to get by but this is fine too.

Also, wait - I thought fox was blind? Or was that a joke on his part?

Anyway, there's much exposition here that basically confirms where Emily and Summer is, but the effects aren't expanded upon. So I got nothing much to say. Eager for the next one.

Dishonored/RWBY crossovers are in rather short supply, so it’s good to see somebody creating a new one to read. Looking forward to seeing how this one goes.

This has me hooked. Waiting on the next one!

At first I thought this was just going to be a simple Isekai, but it would seem like Summer was exchanged for Emily. Curious as to how will this play out.

I'll say it again; this is well written, but I just find the numerals breaks the flow. Not by much, but it does so nonetheless.

This is good, well written, and I'm eager for more.

Though, I find the sudden usage of numerals weird (e.g. A massive 3 story mansion) and directly below it, the 'In' is decapitated from the rest of it's paragraph.

Would've liked for Corvo to come along too, but ah, one can't have everything.

I like the first chapter so far, really is well written and sets up the story rather well. I do wonder if Corvo is coming alongside Emily as the ending is rather ambiguous what happens next. Still I do like what you are doing so far, so have fun writing whatever comes next then. Don't remember if I ever read a fanfic with Emily in the RWBY verse before. Except Corvo which I have seen him in a couple of them.

Ah! It’s always good to see someone attempting to delving into the Dishonored / RWBY crossover vein of stories. As someone who also dabbled with it in the past, I can appreciate someone doing similar.

All hopes your story goes better then mine did - personal problems can easily lead to setbacks, and setbacks will usually lead to disinterest. A shame really, I must get back to writing for that story at some point... But that’s beside the point.

Your introduction was good, and a good start is always needed to grab a readers attention, so that they’ll ether come back or simply follow / favourite your story. So, good job there.
The story - as it is now - is interesting... Can’t say much more, simply because I’ve got the bare minimum to theorise with, but I’m definitely interested in the general direction which you’re leading it. Though, in the end, you’re final choices and decisions will ultimately decide if you’re idea will pay off or not.
I’m hopeful it will though, don’t worry (biased).

If ever needed - which I’m doubtful of - you could always seek out a Bata reader or a story consultant / advisor / aid, but personally I don’t feel you necessary need one or any. You appear to have everything under control as is.
Saying that, having someone who you can bounce ideas off can always be useful. Though, do make sure if you ever decide to ask for assistance from someone, that the person in question clearly understands what you want from them. No good there being any misunderstandings, or something unprofessional happening.

Anyways, I wish you the best of luck with this project.
Hopefully everything turns out for the better, and your story goes on to be the best of the RWBY / Dishonored crossover section - a high position to reach, but definitely a goal to work towards.

Till next chapter.