Hey look up Spider-Man Reign I think elements from that Spider-Man story would be perfect for this story with the setting of New York being a dystopian City like midgar, and the corrupt government what you think?

good chapter, i love how he slowly discovers his powers.

Wow this chapter is awesome, so this Spider-Man had the organic webs that cool, and we get to know where his uncle and aunt works his at a factory that makes the soldier's uniform and his aunt works at the hospital.
I can't wait to see what else happens in the next chapter with Elias and his friend Randy at the junk yard.
Now you said that a few final fantasy seven characters will embody Spider-Man rouges can't wait to see who is become who, now I have a idea for hydro man you could use the 90s Spider-Man cartoon version of him.

Wow this chapter is great, hey you say that some of the final fantasy seven characters are going to become the Spider-Man villains I curious to see who's going to be who, maybe have one of the Turks turn in to a supervillain,? can't wait for the next one and can't wait to see how Elias and Tifa meets .

This is incredible, I like Elias personality, and also like that you base his powers on Miles Morales cause yeah I agree with you with the extra power that Miles has will help Elias in this world, oh maybe add some Kane powers later like his ability to talk to spiders and the stingers that pop out of his wrists, now his aunt and uncle, his uncle seems to work at some kind factory that makes and improve the soldier's uniform I wonder if that's where Elias will get the material to make his suit and his aunt works that the sector 7 hospital, I wonder what's going to happen in next chapter, and l with you on tifa I wonder how will Elias meet tifa ?
I got this crazy idea now what if instead of Elias aunt and uncle it's his friend that bites the big one, what you think?
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Good beginning chapter but you put Lelouchs name in the dream sequence by accident. Also with with whatever suit you choose for Eli maybe go with a more original spider symbol something like this, pin/531987774708698250/, might be cool.

Hey it's me again since in this chapter the Web of Life and Destiny is mention that means you are going to use the spider totems too, look up Ezekiel Sims I think he could good addition to the story, please continue

I like how this story started, hey look up some of john mulaney jokes and hey make you credit the comedians when you use any of their jokes, i can't wait for the next chapter oh maybe since Eli isn't into science you can have Cindy Moon be the one who helps Eli make his second Spider-Man suit, you should look the Spider-Man 2099 for some costume ideas or you could base the suit on the spider that bite Eli red and white like the PS4 suit or the Ben Riley suit but a white hoodie instead of a blue one what you think?
Oh and as for the pairing thing I'm fan of cloud and tifa ending up together but I assume that this is base on the remake I think Eli should go with tifa cause of the changes cause by sephiroth I would love to see the whispers attacking Spider-Man stopping him from meeting tifa.

Nice, i never exepted someone will make a FF7xSpiderman crossover, i hope it becomes better in the future, for suits in your origin arc have Eli to make the Homecoming suit(the one peter made not the one stark made him on civil war), and for the rest of the story to have either PS5 suit or Far From Home. And for pairing i suggest to make it Eli x Jesse.

So I like how it started so Rufus is going to be responsible of making the Spider-Man villains, I wonder if he'll be the Norman Osborne of this story maybe you can use elements from the ultimate Spider-Man comics like the goblin formula transform Norman into the Green goblin monster, and you should also look up Kane the second Scarlet Spider-Man.
Anyway I can't wait for the next chapter.

Well this was a fun start, so this Spider-Man is a comedian I do like the joke at start of the chapter but if you practice some more than I think you can come up with your own jokes, can't wait to see what kind of life this Spider-Man had before the spider bite him and how it change from there.
Now for Spider-Man recommendation, I think you should look up the ultimate Spider-Man comics including the ones with Miles Morales, and Spider-Man noire and as on who this Spider-Man ended up with I think the girl Jesse from avalanche since in the remake it say that she wanted to be a actress so maybe do something there?
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