Congrats on finishing. I am a fan of CSLucaris actually, so I now know what pics you're talking about.

Honestly, this was pretty good.

Nice job. Two chapters in one day.

I admit this story is pretty good. I half expected Neo to still be a criminal and be on a job when she met Coco and that's where the Hurt/Comfort would come from when Coco found out her girlfriend was a crook.

Next chapter will probably be the last since the title is what it is.