"In his opinion Excalibur, just like it's master, simply deemed Merlin worthy."
I LOVE that.

i like the idea of them following merlin and i think you got the characters spot on, so good job

OMG that last sentence was beyond perfect. Great story and even if English isn't your first language it was VERY well written, only a few minor barely noticeable mistakes.

I agree with Arthur’s conclusion. I really liked the way you did this with all the friends discovering Merlin’s secret together and also that Kilgharrah was there as a sort of back up for Merlin. Very fun! Very enjoyable!

Totally getting Thor's Hammer vibes.

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! ESPECIALLY THE BOND BETWEEN MERLIN AND KILGHARRA THIS WAS SO GOOD!