Orange should actually be a advantage because as any real ninja would know every one expects ninja to wear dark clothing it's part of the reason Naruto is/was known as the #1 surprising Ninja

sorry, the int of 10, then the (-9) due to 'dumb as hell' is itself, dumb as hell. That makes no sense, if his int. is 10, then it's 10! Being dumb as hell is a fact, not a fucking stat condition like malnutrition, which can be cured. Ignorance could be a condition, uneducated can be a condition.

Great

Do one for xiaolin showdown

Harem first women wuya

Hmm, guess Naruto will enjoy this new world wonder who's next for his harem anyways keep up the great work!

Please continue
Can’t wait for more
Awesome chapter

ehhhhh. I mean, I like what it could have been, y'know. A story with Naruto in a crossover world. it has a good idea behind it so I was expecting more. now, don't get me wrong, a fic with lots of smut is good and all but you need to read more well-written smut if you want to write it better because it's just so unrealistic so far.
I mean, a dick that size would hurt, not cause pleasure without preparation. I know because I've a friend with a big dick too and he's always complaining about not being able to do his face position with his current gf cus it hurts her (and the previous one needed a LOT of prep before it was satisfying for both (so no fast and hard for him, lol)
Anyways, ignoring the big sized dick, when one does anal hurts, too and needs prep if you don't want them to bleed. You should work in building up the sex parts because everything being so quick is not hot, just makes it clearer it's being written by someone new to smut (and sex in general). I recommend searching about how to write the sex parts if you are really into writing this kind of scenes.
That's all, I think. I liked Kurama being in this, him feeling less ooc than Naruto.
I just wanted to help you in your writing, tho I don't think I will follow it. props will still see it in the future as I follow the 'gamer' tag.
good luck!

Nice job with the first chapter, how about doing a Naruto/Bioshock Crossover story with Naruto paired with Elizabeth, Diane McClintock, Jasmine Jolene, Anna Culpepper and Julie Langford

That was a very good way to start this fanfic, and I REALLY look forward to what happens next time. And maybe for the YuGiOh monster summoning gems, go for the Egyptian Gods as Ultra Rare or something

Like it the story

okay awesome I like it keep it up