This is such a lovely one-shot, sweet and yet so sad. You really balanced those two things well. I enjoyed reading this story.

-PokemonMaster

This was really enjoyable. There is a part of me that would love to see Lin's (this Lin) reaction and views of Mai and Naru when they do return.

That's good I love it

This was a nice one shot. :)

Absolutely amazing! I loved it!