Reviews for The Spider and the Sekirei |
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Guest chapter 2 . 7/9 Lazy fucker |
Major Simi chapter 7 . 6/26 nice chapter |
Gamelover41592 chapter 7 . 6/25 this chapter was funny very well done :) |
Guest chapter 6 . 6/23 Maybe get Peter to do photography like he does back home |
Gamelover41592 chapter 6 . 6/23 great job on this chapter and I don't think they have to send the discipline squad now XD |
Major Simi chapter 6 . 6/23 well interesting chapter |
SpiderWarrior258 chapter 1 . 6/21 Thank you for reading my story I might start another one, this feels like I have a job. |
Guest chapter 5 . 6/18 Tsukiumi & Peter? |
Dark Warrior of The Multiverse chapter 5 . 6/20 Hey I read your story since you first posted it, keep up the good work and your doing one hell of a job, who knows, maybe ill pick up the story again when I'm ready to write again. |
CRUDEN chapter 5 . 6/18 Wait was the ending, I wanna know now |
Gamelover41592 chapter 5 . 6/18 well this is a typical Peter day XD |
Gamelover41592 chapter 4 . 6/14 great job on this chapter |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/12 My question is why he needs to tell them everything. He can just tell some but not everything. It is weird. |
gpno14 chapter 3 . 6/13 Glad to hear that you're motivated to write for a while. I suggest that you don't copy the dialogue of the anime dub word for word. I did that on my last story and it looked like lazy writing more than anything. If you need more Sekirei material to work with, the manga has been finished as well as a small spin off series. That way you don't have to restrict yourself to the incomplete anime adaptation. Looking forward to more! |
Gamelover41592 chapter 3 . 6/13 great job on this chapter and Peter is immune very good :) |