Looks like a good start. If your gonna have them catch pokemon from other regions early then for Luna may a suggest a Whismur and a Toxel for her and Sam so together they’d have both variants. Falinks and Passimian would be a good match for Lynn jr. as well as a Galarian Zigzagoon. A Swirlix would go good with Clyde since he’s a pretty good dessert chef maybe a Munchlax and an Applin would fit him too.

Gotta say not bad, the first chapter is very informative I’ll give you that. Had to brush up on my Pokemon facts a little bit
As for types of Pokémon for the characters, I definitely see Lynn jr with fighters like hitmolee and hitmochan
For Luna probably loud Pokemon like loudred, or maybe start with a whismer that eventually evolves into an exploud

It is interesting. Wondering how it is gonna continue.

Lets see were this will go

Decent start. It was a little heavy on explaining about both properties. I probably would have held off an all the Pokémon exposition till chapter 2. There were also a couple instances of an easy to make typo where you mixed up your I and O. So Sid came out as Sod and Rita came out as Rota. Other than that it was pretty good and I look forward to more.

Love it

Let's see where things go from here. Keep on writing.

This doesn't seem any different than the last version of it I read. Did you even change anything? But again, that's fine. You didn't even need to redo it in the first place.

Not bad. But I think having SO many characters present to Mew's intro to the pokemon world, and wanting to take Lincoln, Luna, and Sam is way to much. Just having the Loud's and Bobby present would have been enough.

Great start

Nice

Dude, stop putting things in all caps. It makes you look retarded.

Amazing