I am excited to add you to the Villain Deku or OC Community. I hope that your story about the Villain continues to expand and that you continue to bring enjoyment to people like me.

It really pissed me off that he is still allowing her to call him ‘Deku,’ but whatever. The writing isn’t bad, but it has a few mistakes. Like, a lot of the time you aren’t separating your paragraphs correctly, only moving the next one to the next line down instead of giving it a space. It’s hard to explain, but it’s easy to see when you look.

I see minor changes now, looking forward to how they spiral.

I'm glad to see he wasn't given a quirk, I suppose for it to be a truly juicy revenge for Sensei that is how it must be.

Wonder how he placed?

Interesting, and excellent opener. A bit convoluted, but it really shows AfO's thought process and answers why he would bother with our lad.

Great start!

Is All for one going to give him a quirk?

holy cow! i love this, wondering how izuku will react to kurogiri's portal at the USJ

Yuh buh duh tuh dah

Still with it heavy

With it heavy

Please, make Izuku infiltrate UA, it's rare for anyone to do so and I hope you could fill that gap. I don't find any mistakes regarding grammar and spelling, congrats.

Stay healthy and keep update!

Okay so I'm going to guess that UA doesn't accept Izuku into the hero course bc of him not having a quirk, and THAT is what tips izuku over the edge to become a villain, if reluctantly.