This was fantastic! If you have more ideas or material for it, I'd love to see this expanded.

HUTAH! Great work, author! I never saw your old version of this story, but you do indeed seem to have learned something from it. This kind of story could lean either way, but I found it most enjoyable! A work! YRRRAAAAAGHHH!

Yay! I love angel Danny! Thank you for writing this.

I love this!