this was good BUT

bladesharks- random

black dranzer- never got give

tala- didn't get

creepy old man- didn't get

plot- didn't get

if you wanna tell me wot was goin on my email's on my profile

that was so cool!

I loved it!

keep up the great work!

cya!

Good story. Now I'm off to read th sequel.

I luv this so much!

That was good. But is that it? Would there be a sequel to this?

- I like it! - so sad it end ;_; but so aonther one! -

Brilliant! I love the details and the way you made every character just right. Please keep it up! And maybe you could write a sequel? Please? By the way, very nice descriptive words. A lot of writer (including me .

You finished! The last chapter's sounds a little confusing to me though.

I'd like to see how this continues. It's interesting so far.

Jade

Interesting story. I'm curious about the next chapters and what will happen next.

Greetings,

Yamuri

Please finish! What happens? Please finish!

It is awsome by the way.

Hikari

Hello

Interesting story you have here so far. It's written quite well, and the characters all seem to be in character. I'd like to see more of this.

Sincerely

Jade

plz continue!

How the hell did Kai end up in a...cave with Tala? Bizarre. Awesome fic though. Sure Kai..jumping through the window was genius. _ Yeah. Can't wait for the update.

Ja!

I really like where this tory is going. Please continue -