Es hermoso, yo en mi mente me estaba imaginando la escena, aunque yo esperaba un besito de parte de katarina pero al menos le dijo que le gusta a maria

Glad to see you've give a shot to this fandom )

I see you respected the canon and made a sweet, short picnic date with Maria sharing her fears with Katarina, reassuring her feelings for our lovely idiot. At least she's wise enough to release her "love" for Maria isn't only related to sweets.

Can't wait to see a romance story from you about them. Gambatte!

Ahh~ This was such a satisfying read. I love Katarina’s dense nature since it’s so fun to see how her wholesome actions make Maria into a flustered mess hahah. I also really like the shift in tone at that one point. The dominance of the peaceful atmosphere helped emphasized the serious vibe of that situation and made it feel waaay darker than I had anticipated.
Thank you for the story. Keep it up!

You wrote both characters quite well, but if you don't mind me asking...I thought Katarina's name was spelled "Catarina" so curious as to why you chose that spelling for her name (not bashing you or anything, just genuinely curious)

Other than that...this one-shot was perfect and had both Maria and Katarina in character.

Katarina, you little minx! XD

Also, there's a reason you're on my follow/favorite list. We love the same yuri couples lol
I'm also rooting for Maria in this god-like-difficulty of a harem competition. Katarina acts differently around her and she's the only one Katarina reacts to when she smiles XD

you definitely got this right