| Reviews for The Last Energybender: Water |
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   Lady Kaiki chapter 10 . 7/18 Love it ! |
| PeculiarFOX chapter 10 . 7/18 Absolutely loved it . Can't wait for the next chapter |
| lilly-flower15 chapter 10 . 7/18 great chapter. update. soon |
| Perseus12 chapter 10 . 7/18 Your welcome. That's more interesting and I'd like to see/imagine Iris kicking Zhao's arse when they meet another time. I'll wait to read the next chapter. |
| lara.niric chapter 10 . 7/18 Okay so far chapter 10 is my favourite. |
| BonesofSmite chapter 9 . 7/16 As a fan of both series, this is awesome! I must say this is well done, well written, and well thought out. Can’t wait for more. |
| laraferreira chapter 9 . 7/12 loved it, please update! |
| HeroLuffy726 chapter 8 . 7/12 I don't know about length, but you're way overusing the "Katara and or Aang use puppy eyes to convince Iris" trope. At some point it begins to make her look rather foolish. Consistently her instincts tell her to do the opposite thing, but she caves because they give her a cute look. Yes the way they react changes significantly from cannon, but at the same time Iris still ignores her instincts. Now there isn't just one solution to this. I'm not suggesting you have her steer them clear of all obstacles. You could also solve it by just not have her notice every potential pitfall. Then it's not as odd when she goes along with what they want. |
| diamondholder chapter 9 . 7/11 Still going Strong on this story which is a great one so far. If anyone tells you different the best advice I can give at this point just ignore them. As someone who has been posting their stories on this site for 5 years at least I know people sometimes leave comments that could get you down. The best thing to do is ignore the bad reviews and relish in the good ones. |
| Lelleg chapter 6 . 7/11 I soooo hope that iris and haru end up together! That would be so wonderful! Can't wait for more updates |
| abeorth chapter 9 . 7/11 thanks for the chapter |
| HarvestMoonBeam chapter 9 . 7/11 Eeee, I am so sorry to hear about that. I can sympathize that panic/anxiety attacks are never fun to have. That awful nagging sensation like you can detect that someone is waiting to jump out at you but you can't tell when the scare is coming. I'm just glad you had someone immediate to speak to. I'm afraid the closest Fanfiction comes to posting visual non written work are the profile icons and the little thumbnail images you can post with your summaries TTwTT By any chance, would your profile image be one of your artwork experiments? 83 Even after all these years, Aang's noble little fib about their ancestors can still make me laugh XD XD |
| kim lily chapter 9 . 7/11 hope you feel better. i love your fict. and i like it a lot |
| lilly-flower15 chapter 9 . 7/11 great chapter update soon |
| belladu57 chapter 8 . 7/10 Very good |
