I've been missing those new chapters reee. Good I checked my email X3 Keep up the good work!

The flashback sequence and song choice certainly help to make this chapter stand out. I'm glad about that, because storytelling can be a pain in the butt sometimes. People like you totally get what quality is all about.

well its cute and charming I'll give you that. Neat making Yami and Mana's siblings. Like the originality with that. Overall great job.

Well for me, I can't really say their Japanese names so I just insert in my mind their English names. The same thing I do when I'm reading their manga. But it was short and sweet and very nice.

I thought Yugi and Jounouchi's characters were amazing here. Their dynamic is pretty good and relatable.

Aww that was so sweet! But I do want to wonder why the relationship went on sososososo fast? Maybe I'm too used to the stereotype ''one person finds out about their feelings and then confesses'' but with them,they did it so fast and without words! Also I really love all the development so far!

I was talking last night for an hour and 20 minutes about all the sexual tension in Yugioh. And test Atem/Yami and Yugi are MADE for each other! and they are the sexist boys in all of anime!

This story is definitely a long one, which means you've got plenty to work from. I appreciate how well thought out this new chapter was, especially with the characters' development. Your knowledge of "Yu-Gi-Oh!" lore is definitely a contributing factor.

This is a story that definitely has me feeling emotional. The way you write Yugi and Yami is absolutely on point, as well as the other characters. I'm pleased to have been introduced to this story by Kelseyalicia, who has a ton of stories on her profile. She has the greatest taste in storytelling.

cute. Very cute

Definetly a date! Can't wait for the next - What would you like this story to turn out to be? Is it going to be a short one? So many questions! \0/

Aaaahh I was tensed like ''They will bump into each other,they will wouldn't they?!'' and then it happened and at the end I started to cry too TwT (emotional person here oof). That was so meaningful! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Good start. Just enough to tease a reader. Hope you will continue the story.