really good read keep up the good work. would be interesting if it went into leni's overall anxiety/disliking to Loris leaving.

I like this more and more.

That had to have been one highly disturbing nightmare for it to effect LUCY of all people like that. Also, Lucy is goth, not emo... I know it's easy to get them mixed up, and even the actual Loud House writers seem to get a little confused in this area, but I'm just pointing that out.

Otherwise, Leni seemed to do well in her tests of handling her siblings today: if she was able to break up fights between Luna and Luan, then Lana and Lola before they really got started, then I'm sure she'll eventually be able to adjust to her new position as the leader of the siblings.

This fiction is amazing! I love the realistic time skip from the Nicktoon and the character development of Leni here. I cannot wait for more of this story, especially for her babysitting training, that would be alot of fun!

Good, good, a good start.

Obviously, this is a scenario that the series proper should be exploring during its fifth season, so it's interesting to see someone give us their take on it.