*This is the author's own story, he/she can choose whether or not to implement things, it is his story and universe. He has his own rights. My review is only a speculation or suggestion, it does not mean I am right or I am wrong. So it is unjust to argue about it. But since you are claiming I am wrong.*

Fanfiction is based upon the canon works of a specific series. Therefore, I have the right to argue about it. If one's fanfiction doesn't based upon Canoncity, then it's not fanfiction but something different from fanfiction.

There's two canons. Legends or Disney Canon. As the author made it clearly that he had used the Legends version. I should based it upon the Legends version of Star Wars. Not that of the Disney Canon.

*The JSDF's universe or our universe or how ever you take it, is in fact separate from the Star Wars Universe as you know we don't see the creator of GATE saying there is Sith and Jedi running around on Earth or the galaxy, their galaxy/dimension/universe would/could have different laws, physics and rules of nature that is different or similar to the GATE/Star Wars universe.*

Unfortunately, going by the canon Lore. There's already a constructed cosmology in Star Wars, an multiverse. You could just look it up. It's called Supernatural Encounters: The Trial and Transformation of Arhul Hextrophon. An official Legends Canon work that is published on Oct. 31, 2018. It is officially canon and licensed under Legends Star Wars.

Nevertheless. The Sith and Jedi draw upon their power from the Force itself. The Force in the Supernatural Encounters: The Trial and Transformation of Arhul Hextrophon is practically multiversal, there's no doubt to that claim. If one read it comprehensively.

Laws, Physics, and rules of nature are under control of the Force. The Force existed beyond such concepts. This is how the Jedi and Sith are capable of fucking up space-time, fate, etc.

*But then why can't we Earthlings use magic? Well it is unknown at this point if we can use it or not, whether we read magic books and can use it or become exposed to the GATE and that world that we can use it or that people from the GATE who can use it, exposes our world with it, and eventually enables us to use it as many people are using it in our world. Who knows, it is up to speculation.*

Magic is one but many manifestations of the Force itself. Magic can be first seen in the Ewok's cartoon, part of the Legends Canon continuity. Just because the Force is omnipresent doesn't mean that everyone had access to it. Maybe the Force had denied certain locations, areas, group of entities, etc of its usage. That's why we don't see them using the Force.

*Now going to the Star Wars universe and that "The Force is an omnipresent and omnipotent power that acts as the all powerful arbiter of everything". If that is the case, then Earth would have force abilities as well then, and have some relation to the force.*

Doesn't disprove my point at all

*As if you claim it is everywhere and all powerful, we would be having force wielding people already in the JSDF's world or have like force filled kyber crystals as well or even some immunity to it as well.*

As once again just like the above. How does it being omnipresent and all powerful? Would give modern Earth the usage of the Force.

*But then since our universe is different it may work a bit, the force abilities or not at all. As the force was not there in the first place. The abilities would be severely weakened on our world. Maybe over time it could be used effectively but I don't see that happening anytime soon as the force would have to travel through two GATEs and be severely weakened by the time it gets here. You would need a lot of force. Who knows.*

Our universe and their universe is under the control of the Force. You presume that the Force would do the same thing in every universe when. Which is an extraordinary claim. Why would the Force be do the same thing to the SW galaxy to our galaxy?

*We also don't see magic being used effectively in our world as well. Another point to add, remember the theory about Thanos against Darkseid? His infinity gauntlet is all powerful, omnipresent and omnipotent, but it did nothing against Darkseid in his universe. As the infinity gauntlet was utterly useless in Darkseid's universe as the infinity gauntlet only works in Thanos's own universe, it is not universal and everywhere. It could apply to the force as well as our universe as it is different and not the same.*

You have made a fallacious claim that the mechanisms of the Force is as the same that of the Infinity Gauntlent. Which isn't the case if you go by official Legends Lore of Star Wars. The Force could be the equivalent of the TOAA of Star Wars. Using your own faulty logic, wouldn't everyone be the Living Tribunal. After all, if you proclaim that the Force is omnipresent and because of the omnipresence, it gives them the powers of the Force. Wouldn't the same apply to the Marvel franchise as a whole?

*But alas, it is the Author's own story and universe, we can't dictate where he/she should go. It is our own suggestions and speculations. It can be used or not be used. It is his/her choice, we are just laying our arguments, theories and suggestions before them.*

That much is true, but we could influence his ideas and thoughts, not dictate it. Albeit fanfiction such as this is based upon the interpretations of the canon works of both Star Wars and GATE. Without it, this fanfic wouldn't even existed to begin with.

Many thanks to Legate Ragnarrius and his/her story. Keep up the good work.

To SupremeDarkTrooper

This is the author's own story, he/she can choose whether or not to implement things, it is his story and universe. He has his own rights. My review is only a speculation or suggestion, it does not mean I am right or I am wrong. So it is unjust to argue about it. But since you are claiming I am wrong. The JSDF's universe or our universe or how ever you take it, is in fact separate from the Star Wars Universe as you know we don't see the creator of GATE saying there is Sith and Jedi running around on Earth or the galaxy, their galaxy/dimension/universe would/could have different laws, physics and rules of nature that is different or similar to the GATE/Star Wars universe. That is why we don't see magic native in our world, but we can see people using magic in our world, as the rules apply a bit here as well. But it is unknown whether or not it is because, in the case of Lelei who used sleep magic on that Russian, can use magic and can use it anywhere or that our world supports the basis of magic enabling her to use it or perhaps Lelei carries something from her world that enables her to use magic into our world as it is a part of Lelei, allows her to use it, like carrying an external power bank but for magic. It charges up in her world and can be brought over to our world and be used eg. But then why can't we Earthlings use magic? Well it is unknown at this point if we can use it or not, whether we read magic books and can use it or become exposed to the GATE and that world that we can use it or that people from the GATE who can use it, exposes our world with it, and eventually enables us to use it as many people are using it in our world. Who knows, it is up to speculation.

Now going to the Star Wars universe and that "The Force is an omnipresent and omnipotent power that acts as the all powerful arbiter of everything". If that is the case, then Earth would have force abilities as well then, and have some relation to the force. As if you claim it is everywhere and all powerful, we would be having force wielding people already in the JSDF's world or have like force filled kyber crystals as well or even some immunity to it as well. But then since our universe is different it may work a bit, the force abilities or not at all. As the force was not there in the first place. The abilities would be severely weakened on our world. Maybe over time it could be used effectively but I don't see that happening anytime soon as the force would have to travel through two GATEs and be severely weakened by the time it gets here. You would need a lot of force. Who knows. We also don't see magic being used effectively in our world as well. Another point to add, remember the theory about Thanos against Darkseid? His infinity gauntlet is all powerful, omnipresent and omnipotent, but it did nothing against Darkseid in his universe. As the infinity gauntlet was utterly useless in Darkseid's universe as the infinity gauntlet only works in Thanos's own universe, it is not universal and everywhere. It could apply to the force as well as our universe as it is different and not the same.

But alas, it is the Author's own story and universe, we can't dictate where he/she should go. It is our own suggestions and speculations. It can be used or not be used. It is his/her choice, we are just laying our arguments, theories and suggestions before them.

Many thanks to Legate Ragnarrius and his/her story. Keep up the good work.

Yours truly,
Guest101

This is epic. Anyway, I have wanted an Imperialistic army from Star Wars to invade GATE and this is it. I wanted to see more. So, the JSDF is here? They stand no chance. There's nothing on Earth that could ever hope to stand a chance ever.

Blasters would make a .50 Caliber machine gun look like a pellet gun and even higher main armaments of the Iowa-class Battleship. Their conventional artillery might be just throwing nuke-level firepower. Although, the explosions wouldn't be the equivalent of chemical-based explosions. I do remember that it needs to be hundreds of thousands of times of firepower for the DEW or Directed Energy Weapon in order to replicate a chemical explosion of the same size from a Star Wars channel named "Blastech". So if a chemical explosion of 10 meters happened, the DEW needs to be hundreds or thousands of times of firepower of that chemical explosion because it is focused on a singular point.

Any modern army would get obliterated by the sheer firepower of Star Wars tech.

Jet Fighters ain't gonna do jack shit. Every single combat vessel in Star Wars had ECM (ElectroCounterMeasures), making their missiles completely useless, their targeting systems useless, their radars useless. Modern Tanks would be just target practice for any infantry with a blaster. Hell, I bet a civilian with a blaster pistol could make a modern tank useless with some shots. Artillery? Shields, shields and the artillery of Star Wars is much much stronger from the mere fact that blasters would make .50 caliber machine guns.

*I feel like since Earth is in a different universe, we would be immune to force abilities. Just like the Yuuzhan Vong in the Star Wars Universe. but we would still experience things like force lightning, as that is just electricity. Keep it up.*

The Guest is wrong. The Force is an omnipresent and omnipotent power that acts as the all powerful arbiter of everything.

Fate manipulation is something powerful Force-Users can do. Death is a fixed point in time and space in the Star War's universe. Not unlike fixed events in history like in Doctor Who. That always happen no matter what. Which is why it is so hard to defy the natural order, and bring the dead back. Darth Plagueis, and Darth Sidious finding a way around that messed with it big time.

Taken from Darth Plagueis:

*The dispersal of midi-chlorians at the moment of physical death was, for lack of a better term, inexorable. Analogous to his fated confrontation with the Woebegone crew, the moment of death appeared to be somehow fixed in space and time. According to his Sith education, since Captain Lah and the others had been in some sense dead from the moment Plagueis’s gaze had alighted on the freighter, it followed that the midi-chlorians that resided in alleged symbiosis with them must have been preparing to be subsumed into the reservoir of life energy that was the Force long before Plagueis had stowed away. His attempts to save them—to prolong that state of symbiosis—were comparable to using a sponge to dam a raging river.*

*His election seven years earlier had been one of the signs Plagueis had been waiting for—the return to power of a Valorum—and had followed on the heels of a remarkable breakthrough Plagueis and Sidious had engineered in manipulating midi-chlorians. A breakthrough the Muun had described as “galactonic.” Both of them suspected that the Jedi had sensed it as well, light-years distant on Coruscant.*

*Only the Sith understood that sentient life was on the verge of a transformative leap; that through the manipulation of midi-chlorians—or the overthrow of the Forceful group that supervised them—the divide between organic life and the Force could be bridged, and death could be erased from the continuum.*

In order to beat back death. You have to contend with the force directly. Heck, Palpatine had even entered into the hell of Star Wars and pretty much escaped from it.

*Palpatine's body was destroyed. Separated from his clones, Palpatine was forced to survive in the maddening, bodiless existence of the void. Through sheer will he retained his identity, crossing the gulf of space to again take up residence in his clone body.*

-The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia

Take note of that single word "void". Chaos is the name for the hell of Star Wars. Chaos also takes the another name known as the "The Void". This means that Sidious must have forcibly been dragged into hell and with his sheer will power. He prety much escaped from Hell.

In fact, one of the Emperor’s Dark Side Adepts, Nefta, states that Palpatine could be trapped in the Netherworld of the Force for a thousand years, indicating that he believes Palpatine could escape on his own one day.

*“We had to do it, Sedriss… Palpatine is trapped in the Netherworld-he could be there for a thousand years!”*

-Nefta, Dark Empire II

Space-Time manipulation, check. Force Storms FTW! It should be noted that there is a new official Legends Canon material in OCT. 31, 2018 that directly stated that Star Wars have a multiverse. At least in Legends.

As for the Yuuzhan Vong. There are just like wounds in the Force. Take a look at Nathema after the death of Vitiate.

*The ecological revitalization of Nathema has been nothing short of miraculous. Vibrant plant life has not only taken root but flourished, dramatically altering the planet's once-desolate landscape.

Force-users no longer experience the unsettling "wrongness" that they once felt whenever setting foot on the planet. The air has become fresher, and the weather more dynamic.

That this has all occurred since the death of Valkorion cannot be a coincidence, though experts cannot agree on any precise environmental mechanism that could have brought about such an abrupt change.

From (Star Wars: The Old Republic: The Nathema Conspiracy: Codex Entry titled "Zildrog.")*

Tenebrae/Vitiate/Valkorion prevented healing the wound in the Force around MEDRIAAS. This also gain interesting insights. Does this mean that Vitiate could have known a way to manipulate, create, destroy, etc with Wounds in the Force. I believe so. It should be noted that there is implication of Darth Sidious of actually being a wound in the Force.

*And then there was Palpatine, of course: he was beyond power. He showed nothing of what might be within. Though seen with the eyes of the dark side itself, Palpatine was an event horizon. Beneath his entirely ordinary surface was absolute, perfect nothingness. Darkness beyond darkness. A black hole of the Force.*

This could mean one thing. Beings who are wounds in the Force or just extremely powerful within the dark side could affect wounds in the Force to their will and make it under their control. Meaning, that wounds in the Force doesn't grant full immunity to Force-Sensitives. Although, you would need to be another wound in the Force or an extremely powerful dark side to do so.

If the chapters had much more words and details than it has now I would read it but it just doesn't look or seem interesting as it is now

I feel like since Earth is in a different universe, we would be immune to force abilities. Just like the Yuuzhan Vong in the Star Wars Universe. but we would still experience things like force lightning, as that is just electricity. Keep it up.

Add some war droids, veichles and ships please

well shit, the sith empire will conquer falmart and earth, if they do take over earth, then I for one welcome our sith overlords and be trained into the ways of the dark side of the force :)

I wonder if a random kingdom on Falmart secede from the Saderan Empire and declared alignment to the Sith Empire? I would imagine if Olga Discordia the Queen of the Dark Elves (Kuroinu) would find love attraction to Wraith since he's the "Hero of Kaas City" and "Slayer of Fire Dragon"?

I wonder if an apostle would make an ally to the Sith like Rory Mercury who allied with JSDF? Who would reach the Mercantile City of Italica: JSDF or Sith Empire?

I'll wait to read the next chapter.

Pretty good well very short but still good enough

keep up the good work lets hope the republic doesnt get any funny ideas

Here's an idea you should add darth malgus and darth revan also do the sacking of coruscant but instead of coruscant it should be pina's empire (falmart, italica, etc.) Pls destroy the jsdf and have rory and the others side with the sith :)

good job cant wait for the next chapter

This is really good I hope people will favorite it I already told some of my friends and they said they give it a go
Pls update soon thx.

i cant wait for when pina meets the dark concil

This is really good so far I like it pls keep it up and update soon.