Reviews for Chronicles of Zoic Trainers
djinn chapter 1 . 7/2
interesting idea look forward to new updates.
Be my Guest chapter 1 . 7/2
Ash is too young and more focused on his obsession with pokemon to have a relationship with a girl, and less on a harem. For me the only girl who could even have a relationship with him is Serena.
Tony Anderson chapter 1 . 7/3
Wow, another interesting story here. Nice. I read your profile a minute ago, and I totally understand where you're coming from. Just so long as you don't give up and burn yourself out from working so much. Hope you and your folks are staying safe too! Have a great weekend! :)
SilverWolf1130 chapter 1 . 7/3
Good start so far. Hope you continue this and Pokefied Ninja. :)
Kosword chapter 1 . 7/3
I agree that having several protas with Harem is incredibly tedious when it comes to developing the character as well as his relationships with the different girls.
Personally I do not like and have never liked Ash. not only because of the character itself, but because they make him lose and never win. Everything you learn on past trips and the experiences you get later are forgotten as if you never did. because so many pokemon when he doesn't even train his own enough to win the leagues and then when he goes to another region he abandons them and that's it.

If you plan to put him as a co-star and with him a couple, make it just one and that's it. in addition to Ash being too in love with the pokemon he practically seems to have no desire for the opposite gender.
Sasmur chapter 1 . 7/2
I'm not a big fan of stories with two characters as protagonists, in addition to the fact that they both have harem, it seems ridiculous to me. Make Ash or Naruto the protagonist since it is difficult to develop a protagonist and his relationship with the different girls of his affection so that you put another protagonist who must also develop himself as a character and his subsequent women.

Good Luck.
Jay Leonardo chapter 1 . 7/2
Interesting. I'll keep my eye on this
Zakrark chapter 1 . 7/2
No, another Harem story with Ash. I like Ash but I think the only one I should be paired with is Serena. Lana and Mallow should be in Naruto's Harem. I'll see how it goes but looking at your past records I think it will also be abandoned.
ExoChaos chapter 1 . 7/2
You have a lot of stories pending so I don 'ah have much hope to see this full story for at least twenty years from now. Also I think Ash shouldn't have as many girls since he has enough with Serena, Anabel, Johanna and Grace. It would be interesting if you added the wool mother with Naruto since I have hardly seen her being paired with him.
HyperA2019 chapter 1 . 7/2
It be interesting Shiny Gardevior join Naruto's harem.