Like the chapter and the direction of the story. Take the story slow as we need some time to get accustomed to characters. Think that we dono who or what percy is . Dont write thinking with percy from books establish that he is good soldier or caption and establish something of the men so when they die we will care , like saying Frank was reading hazel's letter or leo getting embarrassed or percy in combat and show how deadly he is .. just my suggestion.

Hope to see more

Nice start .. keep going liked the sngle to council and its members