Reviews for Astonishing Spider-Man: Earth 16
K-Rock 1315 chapter 3 . 7/19
Hey, interesting story so far. It does feel like the intro how Eli became spiderman is dragging on a bit. You started the story off with him having already been spiderman for a couple of months and Batman looking into him then switched gears to backtrack and tell his origin story. Not that its bad to tell his origin but makes that first chapter feel like a red herring and creates a sort of 'get on with it' vibe to have him meet with Batman and join the team. Anyway, other than that I like this take on a 'DC universe spiderman, can't wait for him to meet up and fight that black spider dude.

ps I think he should get with Zatana, she never gets any love in these kinds of stories and I think it could make for an interesting dynamic.
d1n0s chapter 3 . 7/18
Meh. Could have used a little crime fighting(returning a little old ladies purse would have been fine).
I guess that will happen next chapter.
Flame Wolfe chapter 3 . 7/17
I Really enjoyed this chapter I am looking forward to next one
kival737101 chapter 3 . 7/17
So he'll have Organic Webbing huh that's not used often enough looking forward to see what happens next
DoctorWhoXX chapter 2 . 7/14
I'm looking forward to reading more of this story. Also, I know that you said you were ignoring pairings at the moment, but I would like to suggest Starfire. Not enough stories have her as a love interest, and I think she's badass.
d1n0s chapter 2 . 7/12
It would of been cool if he'd been that Peter Parker who fell into that giant terrarium and became a mass of spiders with Peter's mind.
If Eli is going to protect the Web you can hold off on any permanent pairing since he'll have a multiverse of women to choose from, do some window shopping before buying.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/12
Let me guess the cliche uncle murder
Flame Wolfe chapter 2 . 7/12
I Love the chapter I’m looking forward to the next one
JPrime chapter 1 . 7/10
Please ship him with Zatanna, I would like to see a Spider-Man x Zatanna story.
d1n0s chapter 1 . 7/9
Was Eli bitten by the Miles Morales spider(Spider-Man package plus bio-shock and camouflage)?
It would be funny if Eli developed a little crush on Batwoman to only find out later she's a lesbian.
Lightning Lass from the Legion of Superheroes would make a good match for Spider-man.
Flame Wolfe chapter 1 . 7/8
This is really interesting I look forward to reading more of this!

For pairings I will go for Artemis That one would be pretty interesting
kival737101 chapter 1 . 7/7
1. This looks interesting looking forward to more

2. Can you Translate what the Aunt said for those of us who DON'T speak a second Language?

3. If your having trouble deciding then why not give him both for a Ménage à Trois relationship?

4. Will his suit be an Original Design or will it be one of the other known existing Spider Suits

5. How much Gear will he have?

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6. At what point in time in the series will he arrive?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7
I think Spider-Man and Zatanna would be a good idea.