Reviews for Shattered Bonds |
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Quality over Quantity chapter 3 . 7/24 I’m glad to see that Ash isn’t completely angst, and can still have a good laugh! |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/23 Please update please |
KaousuShin chapter 1 . 7/15 Now that was a pleasant surprise, a hint of Ash and Latias shipping. Gotta say I read the original one from you loved it then and hope this one turns out just as great keep going man. |
Quality over Quantity chapter 2 . 7/14 New RubyxMarnie pairing? To be honest, I was more of a RubyxGladion fan, given how Gladion is rather cold and vicious (Or at least SUPPOSED to be, I didn't like how the anime nerfed Gladion and Lusamine), but Ruby brings out his deep down soft side. Marnie is more sweet and gentle, and she could work with Ruby. I just preferred the Gladion arc in the original! Interesting to see Rose showing up, I hope he gets a redemption arc! I think that he wasn't best suited as an antagonist, as he had good intentions. But like you said, he "tried to solve an energy crisis that wouldn't happen for a very long time!" |
MarshMarauder chapter 1 . 7/14 Can't wait to see where you take this I'm loving the Galar crew's dynamic and I can't wait to see where that goes |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/14 Please update |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8 great chapter keep it up and at least iris this time is still ash's friend |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7 Please update |
Quality over Quantity chapter 1 . 7/7 WOO! First review! This is an interesting take on the story idea, and I can't wait to see more. In general, I would suggest that while it is darker, maybe not to make it TOO dark, with at least a fair bit of humor thrown in, or at least dry wit. Also, I hope that some of the relationships among the main characters not be TOO antagonistic. Disliking other characters is fine, but not outright HATE. I would also like to suggest that you not overuse Shiny Pokemon. You had quite a lot of Shiny Pokemon under different trainers in the original, and that rather made it lose it's luster. Can't wait for more! |