Reviews for Diary of the Bethrothed
hanaemajin chapter 3 . 7/17
“I'm afraid our first words to each other would be the "I do".” LMFaooOOo I died! T AT

on another note: I look forward to them finally talking to each other!
Jasmine Jawdat chapter 3 . 7/17
Can’t wait for the next chapter
Jasmine Jawdat chapter 2 . 7/15
LOVE IT! When is the new chapter?
hanaemajin chapter 2 . 7/12
I have this gut feeling that Illumi became fond of Tora over time but I guess we'll see! ahah!
hanaemajin chapter 1 . 7/12
ohmygohd what a start. I just know this is going to be interesting!
rentamiya chapter 2 . 7/12
Interesting ohhoooh a stalker illumi
But good chapter
Hopefully hopefully longer next time im waiting for the main course
Since all of these just feels like just an introduction
SilverThornz chapter 2 . 7/11
HE GAINS YOUR LOVE TORA, THAT'S WHAT!
lol i adore this story so MUCH! I feel like I've been waiting a whole year for this to come out when it hasn't been long since I've followed it.
The only downside is the chapter lengths. It's not nearly enough to satiate my intrigue but I guess that's purposefully done. I'm very excited to see how they'll interact.
Great job!
rentamiya chapter 1 . 7/11
Waaahhhhh moreeeee moreeeee
SilverThornz chapter 1 . 7/10
WOW! This is insanely intriguing! It's really interesting because I've read so few illumi OC fanfics. This one is very well written I can imagine everything you're saying and the character feels both real and relatable. She feels young to me but reflective and I really really enjoyed reading this. So whenever you have the time please go ahead and update as soon as possible because I need more of it. I want to say more but the chapter was extremely short, so if you update I'll be sure to leave a very very lengthy review. Thanks so much for sharing it and I hope you update!
dianalillian chapter 1 . 7/10
Interesting introduction. I’m looking forward to their second meeting :)