| Reviews for Original Sin |
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   Caroliny Hotchner chapter 14 . 17h hi i'm loving your story and i'm hoping Aaron will be with Erin |
| hurricanehorse chapter 14 . 8/5 I am really loving this. The gentleness warms me. |
| hurricanehorse chapter 13 . 8/4 I love the way you write Erin and David. The only character I have never liked is Garcia. I am a super private person and she can't keep her nose or mouth out of anyone's business. I could not have a friend like since she's always flapping her mouth. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/2 Another good chapter! I’d really like to see the conversation between Aaron and Haley when she showed up at the office. Will Aaron cause legal trouble for Erin by demanding joint custody? Can’t wait to see more! Keep it up! |
| Lady Lunera chapter 12 . 7/31 Great chapter! |
| Talia Willows chapter 11 . 7/28 I'm really loving the story! |
| Lady Lunera chapter 9 . 7/22 ¡OMG! |
| SunnyInOregon chapter 3 . 7/20 More nasty Aaron. But I am loving Helen. She seems a lot lie a certain technical analyst we both know and love. |
| SunnyInOregon chapter 1 . 7/20 Damn, Aaron is being an ass, isn't he? Not really liking him at the moment. |
| Hurricanehorse chapter 7 . 7/20 I am really liking this story. I like the comfort between Erin and David. |
| Lady Lunera chapter 6 . 7/17 I hate Hotch in this story! |
| Lady Lunera chapter 5 . 7/16 This is very complicated... |
| Lady Lunera chapter 4 . 7/15 Ohh my god, this is very interesting! Poor Erin... |
| Lady Lunera chapter 3 . 7/15 Helen is a great friend! |
| Lady Lunera chapter 2 . 7/10 Ohh, poor Erin... |
