Add salem please she needs love and knowing naruto he can talk no jutsu here and crap. Also do her justice

Good start. Looking forward to more.

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Great chapter also F Ozpin we ain't playing his and Salem game

Wow, that was a great prologue, this story really catches my attention, it is very interesting to see a 12-year-old Naruto integrating into the world of Remnant from an early age. I hope you can update this story soon, greetings and good luck friend.

interesting timeline for Naruto to start, and any chance for fem. Kyuubi? (rereading my old fav. fem Kyuubi fan fictions)

really looking forward to reading more

me gusta el fic, continua por favor

Good chapter.

Great story mate, really looking forward to reading this story. One thing I'm not too sure about is in regards to the Shadow Clone Technique, I'm not sure if this was from Narutos understanding of the technique (as he only uses it for fighting/distraction purposes and he currently doesn't know about the information gathering aspect of the technique) or if it was a typo (something I honestly doubt cause it seems like you know about the series, characters, etc.)

For the Harem definitely looking forward to it as I usually see Naruto (series) and Harem being way more accepting and understanding than nearly any series that is in the Harem genre (honestly most anime/manga that has the 'Harem' tag for the most part don't need it for various reasons). Definitely like Team RWBY and Pyrrha being in Narutos harem, don't know if you already have the girls in mind but if I had to include one girl it would be Velvet (shes such a sweet girl,plus adding another faunus into his harem would help balance it out (4 humans, 2 faunus, 1 extra)).

I would personally put Naruto at Seventeen years same as everyone else as not only would Naruto be more trained but he won't be showing up anyone (being 15 who would probably be stronger than everyone would kinda make others jealous, we already have Ruby who is touted as the fastest adding Fifteen year old Naruto who is touted as the strongest would definitely be making others excrete negativity). Seventeen year old Naruto would also make it easier for the girls to be accepting as Naruto (15) would kinda put the girls off (somewhat), idk again, personally, I think Naruto (17) would just make things easier.

Narutos team? I'm wondering about this as usually three things happen: 1) Naruto is with Team RWBY as a 5th member, 2) Naruto swaps out Jaune as the Leader of JNPR (Jaune is no longer in the series), and 3) Narutos team is OCs. I'm mostly just wondering what you plan on doing

To end this (cause this is getting very long) I'm kinda nervous about his weapon, personally I'm not a fan of Naruto getting a gun for a weapon (I know in reality ninjas did use artillery and they do keep up with technology, but again Naruto using one just seems weird for me). So I'm mostly wondering what kinda weapon is Naruto gonna be using? Will he keep his kunai/shuriken only, or will he get a dual weapon and his kunai/shuriken will be used more sparingly

Yes! Pyrrha will LIVE!

An interesting first chapter, pre time-skip Naruto has so many possibilities to mold and form that I wonder how he will end up. After all, he hasn't taken Jiraiya dream as his own goal. Huh, I thought he would be more shocked by the news, but is Naruto so not surprising that he managed to bounce back.

Trained by Qrow? That will be interesting. As for the pairings, I would prefer if you left it at those 5 girls so you can flesh out the relationship between them and 7 I think is excessive. But is your story so you know better.

I'll wait for the next update and thank you for the read.

look I like a good naruto cross over as much as the next guy but why do people always include traveling across worlds they are nowhere near even theorizing that possibility. but it is interesting to see naruto spending some years at beacon csnt wait for more

Personally, I think he should enter at 15 years old as it is the same time as Shippuden. Furthermore, I feel it would be good for Ruby to have someone around her age. Finally, Naruto is TOO good to not enter Beacon at a younger age.

I liked the chapter!

I like this chapter, continue please.