Reviews for Metanoia |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Jealous Apollo is so extra! Will there be other direct interaction with gods, like Ares or Zeus? |
![]() ![]() Hi and thank you for your hard work in updating early! I think the chapter was great but I didn't get why you put that Aphrodite would not approve of Apollo chasing after Percy as she told him to make his love-life interesting in the PJO book The Titan's Curse. Even if she changed her opinion to not interfere in Percy's love-life, how would Apollo know that? |
![]() ![]() I liked that you put Zeus and Poseidon as overprotective guardians of Percy. I also liked the advice Percy gave to Apollo. I hope you'll make the next chapter just as interesting and maybe a bit long. I have nothing against short chapters but I prefer long ones as they make me feel more connected to the story. But it is completely up to you; just a request. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice chapter. im interested to see how this turns out. keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() Well, here's your review, and trust me I appreciate your writing...so next chapter pretty-please-with-a-cherry-on-top? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for clearing things up. |
![]() ![]() I really like your stories-this one included. So plz continue this one and give regular updates. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fall into temptation, please. I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continue por favor |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for posting this! Please update soon, can't wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() not bad *follow* |