I'm not a reader of OCs in stories but this's really good so far, please continue!

The cat seems suspicious.. ehh maybe it’s just me. Also I think this is good so far.

This is an interesting story, keep going!

Omggggg! The line "i didnt want to start with you" had me tearing up T T. I love levi, absolutely love him. The way he ended up helping but in his own way was great to read. Im so glad theyve finally made up!

Hey, Angel!

Just reread the chapter & I love the friendship between your OC & Salt's! Poor Angel for looking after mischievous Vetty! It was nice of you to give a cameo of mine, Katie's & Em's OCs in this chapter! I love that you've kept all of the characters IC! It's cute to see Shisui teasing my OC like a playful older bro. Cute to see Cronus noticing Nyx in the garden! Awww, I'm so sorry about the loss of your grandfather & the other members. :( Looks like Vetty was pissed at your OC for "abandoning" her & had to stay with you for good. Your style of writing, as always, is absolutely marvelous!

Gonna read the next chappy! :D

With love,
Raineya

Hey, Salt!

Your style of writing is most certainly beautiful! & may I just say of how much you've improved? It's so thoughtful of you to be mentioning mine & Katie's OCs. And I really love the way your OC & Levi have met each other on the surface. I know it was sad for your OC to part ways from the UW but good thing that she took a huge step to start her own life in the surface! You've kept Levi & Itachi so IC!

Anyway, I can't wait to read more from your OC's part! :D

With love,
Raineya

ALRIGHT. im gonna do a live reaction in this review so it may not make much sense but i wanna try it out _. Very irritating pest LMAO OMG IS LEVI GONNA SUSPECT SALT IS GOING TO KILL VETTY! Okay he knows, he definitely knows. i wonder ehats going through his mind at this very moment, i mean, his girlfriend is going to kill her best friends cat! omds XD salts stabbing reminds me of that scene in willy wonka when the umpa lumpas were trying to stab that kid in the tv XD Poor angel but im laughing so hard at this scene XD ITACHIIIIII! Did itachi... just JOKE?! Ah im done. Thank you salt. That was an amazing read LMAO

With every chapter that passes i adore salt more and more. Ohoho whats this? an afair between Nyx and Cronus? kukuku

This ship is so promising! SaltxLevi is liiiifee! She's so awkward and adorable! Your writing style is amazing as per usual! Levi is very much IC and I love seeing his interactions with his new gf. Such a great couple these two! He's sweet in his one Levi way! Hahaha!
The meeting with Angel was Fate! So cute!
The Essex bit, the restraining order line and the world history one just cracked me up! It's so much fun!
Amazing work!

This is one of my favorite things I've ever read! A guilty pleasure like no other! Such a wonderful chapter! Vetty is trouble, but she's also very cute!
What a mess she got Angel into! But at least, they got to have this fateful encounter with the every graceful and jaw-dropping Thanatos and Hypnos!
Suigetsu also lend a hand, I see! The scenes are described so vividly!
I kept envisioning Vetty's art while I read the first scene! Poor Angel! You have a lot on your plate with the little devil kitty!
Every since with Hypnos and Thanatos has me on the edge of my seat!
As for the last one... Oh. My. God! PERFECT, SO INCREDIBLY HOT! My inner fangirl tore through my every defense and got out to scream her lungs out! Such a steaming scene! Nyx is exactly as I dreamed of! Madara is so dominating, so incredibly sexy! I loved every second of it! I screamed, I blushed, I cried of joy!
Just WOW!
Can't wait for what's next!

Hey, Angel!

I just reread the 1st chapter of this ficlet me say that I enjoyed reading this lighted-hearted fic! Your meeting with Vetty was so cute! Salt’s so thoughtful in giving you hints about the kitty! And poor you who didn’t know that Vetty set you into a blood contract, which may lead to all the adventures that awaits youyour kitty! I love her mischievous laugh at the end “Nyehehehe” xd

I’ll rereadreview the other chapters! -

With love,
Raineya

Ok I love every chapter. I adore vetty and angel’s relationship, and I love salt and levi! I love salt’s whole backstory. Mikoto and madara HAHHAHA. Honestly any scene with itachi and shisui in the same scene is a treat. I like that nurse was up in the tree with shisui! Everything is so well written, it MUST be canon!

I loved all the cameos! Emily's appearance was a surprise, it was great! Shisui teasing Rain was cute! I really like the new twist on Nyx! and that Cronus interaction... BOI. My heart goes out to Angel and Itachi. Both sad and lonely when they shouldn't be.

But most of all, LEVIIIISo on point. I read it five times and counting. Can't believe how spot on your portrayal is! Loved it!

This is so PEFRECT! SO BEAUTIFUL!
Angel's talent at story telling shines through even in such a lighthearted story!
Vetty is such a little devil! We all love her terribly though.
Levi's portrayal is magnificently spot on! I ship SaltxLevi!
And then, my gods, the scene of my dreams! I am still giggling and screaming and giggling and screaming without a pause!
Itachi's long hair unbound! So handsome!
I loved the cameos of fellow readers! This is such a heartwarming story in all sorts of ways!

I absolutely loved Salt's backstory. Her pain at being invisible, was heart-wrenching! Thanatos doesn't mean to be cruel, truly! But I can understand why she felt that he was, in hardly ever so much as looking her way. It was so sad how she felt she wasted all those years of her life. Her decision to leave was so brave. I also love how she stepped out into the mortal world and was totally clueless!

Levi's character made me laugh. He's very curt, which makes him seem fun to write. I also love how realistic you made it to have her speak strangely and for him to know right away something seems off about her. Sets up their future interactions nicely. I wonder if she ever tells him where she came from? I guess it's forbidden, but a certain deity will be telling a mortal eventually too, so looks like she might be able to bend some rules.

Your writing style is beautiful, as always. I really enjoy it so much. So descriptive with lovely word usage. I loved the cameos of other characters, too. It was a really interesting read and can't wait to see where we go with the rest of the chapters together.