Nice opening! Can't wait to see what the future has in store for a magical fire/lightning Anna. I'm also impressed that Elsa's vocabulary is so good at three years old. She already knows the word intuition, wow.

Great job with the conversation between Agnarr and Iduna showing why they are making the choices they are. I'll admit Elsa without powers is not Elsa for me but I'm interested to see how this story goes.

Great job.

This is a first chapter that I greatly had the pleasure of reading up on. I appreciate the worldbuilding you add to the "Frozen" universe so very much.

Oh my! Beautifully well-written. I enjoyed this chapter a lot and it was nice to see Idina tell Elsa about her past. Great work.

very nice. Though it might been cooler if both had powers and they both looked out for each other more then they did in the movies.

Interesting. Especially Kai. It'll be nice if he actually had a history wherein he encountered people with magic? Or he knows someone, maybe a friend? That will be a nice addition to the story. And Iduna coming from somewhere beyond the Enchanted Forest? That caught me right there. So will there be a different tribe besides the Northuldra? That will be better than the original sequel. :D

Liking the introduction of the history so far, cheers into hoping that it'll be explained more in a later chapter.

That's all for now, great work. Looking forward to the next.

Bruni could teach her!
Oh my sweet stuff I can't even think of! ELSA YOU PRECIOUS SNOWFLAKE DON'T YOU EVER CHANGE YOUR ADORABLE!
wow this is so amazing. Great chapter!

I get that Agnarr is scared that Anna is born with fire powers, but I hope he doesn't end up disowning her or killing her just because she's different. I'd be angry and sad if he did. All I can do is hope he accepts Anna for who she is.

Oooh, I'm intrigued! I wonder how Agnarr will feel about his daughter being 'different', and the fact that it might give Iduna's true heritage away. Another great chapter! Keep it up!

The last name of the Royal family (Runeard, Agnarr, Elsa, and Anna) is Arnadalr. It was confirmed by Jennifer Lee, one of the creators behind Frozen. Kristoff's is Bjorgman, Hans's is Westergaard, Honeymaren and Ryder's is Nattura, Mattias's first name is Destin. But its okay. Use the one you chose. I like it.

Just finished re-reading the chapter. It has a promising run, I'll say that. I sure hope Anna's power origin is an interesting one. To be honest, the whole "Elsa got her powers because of the elemental spirits" is kind of... usual. Would love to see a new origin story. I'll suggest one; maybe one of their ancestors had the same experience to have a child with powers, something like that.

But you're the author, it's your story :) Thumbs up, and looking forward to the next one.

I'm glad that Anna was healthy. I'd look forward to seeing more of Anna's and Elsa's relationship.

I have a twin sister and I would do anything to protect her, and she likewise. I totally understand the promise to protect. Its a hard promise to keep but one that is so important. Well done!

Interesting start. Can't wait to see more

I hope this story continues, because this was a fantastic prologue you've written out. The ideas you have for the "Frozen" universe are absolutely engaging. :)