Reviews for Mending The Wounds
Anikong chapter 3 . 1h
Really happy I found this story since its quite unique. While there are generic characters react fanfic, I don't think there's any showing what the character do afterwards or could do with that knowledge. So I'm excited to read more of this story as it's updated. Also wanted to point out that the capital of Britannia in canon is Pendragon and not Pentagon as you've written.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/27
I love how suzaku explained what they saw about the truth. And poor lelouch Nunnally has joined the cult of pizza. C.C you witch!
Vegito is King chapter 3 . 7/28
I like the way Lelouch told SUzaku off for his past actions. Seriously will that guy ever get punished for his multiple betrayals? Making him the leader of the Black Knights when Lelouch is not present sounds dumb. He is a great soldier and fighter but has zero ability when it comes to tactics. And Lelouch is trusting Suzaku with Nunnally;s safety? WTF did he forget who dropped the Fleija that almost killed her? Even if the geass forced Suzaku to drop it, Suzaku knew that the Fleija would be loaded into the Lancelot. That makes him culpable as well. I just really hate this guy.

The others are not a sight for sore eyes either. The only one who Lelouch can trust 100 percent is Jeremiah. He never betrayed him and proved his unflinching loyalty. Trying to pass off Nunnally as cute right now feels forced because she needs to have a serious and long talk with Lelouch about her actions. She killed people with the felijas. She can no longer take the moral high ground. Not to mention the fact that she sided with Schneizel over Lelouch and did not try to search or visit Lelouch during her tenor as Viceroy. Even if Lelouch would never hate Nunnally, he will certainly not trust her to do as he says.

I hope he doesn't make Ohgi a leader again. It would be the height of stupidity to place someone who constantly questioned his orders and literally shot him in the back.

CC is also one that needs to talk to Lelouch. She kept a lot of info that would have been helpful from him. Not just about Marianne but about Charles and his geass, VV, the geass order, Mao, and other things that I can't recall. Sure he has a fondness for her but I feel CC has not shown her full potential as an ally. Her heart was not in it because she thought Charles would win. She was so blinded by her desire to die she forgot to take into account that if she had given up her code and died, she would have been brought back with the other dead people if Charles had succeeded. Let's not also forget her failure to kill Mao at first and even saying to him that she loved him. She needs to acknowledge that she did not care for Lelouch at first and was using him for her own gain.

Kaguya should be rewarded. In my opinion she was the one who caused the least betrayal to Lelouch since the UFN was a group thing not just her own decision.

I feel like Shirley is being given a free pass to her faults because she died. When her father died and she was depressed she acted crazy. A normal girl who has never seen violence suddenly took her father's gun to shoot the one she felt was responsible. Villetta helped to cause this too. Most people want to put the blame only on Mao for her having shot Lelouch but even if it is true he did not do anything when Shirley was about to kill Zero before she knew it was Lelouch. Are we supposed to ignore her bloodlust for the one she felt was responsible. It shows how erratic Shirley can be given the right circumstances.

I always thought Kallen was a poor choice for a potential love interest for Lelouch. The only thing we know for sure is that Kallen has feelings for him but the opposite is not so clear. In Euphie and Shirley's case, Lelouch said that the former was his first love and that he might have loved Shirley. Kallen received no such words. She is cetainly attracted to him but how can there be romantic feelings without a basis?

I wonder if in this story the motivations for Lelouch continuing his war will change. Continuing to say that he wants to create a peaceful world for Nunnally sounds laughable considering she launched several fleijas and killed several people. She was the one who launched the fleija in Pendragon too right? It doesn't surprise me to read about Nunnally's attempts to convert her siblings. Such hypocrisy is par for the course when it concerns the Britannian royal family and Suzaku. So her siblings (excluding Lelouch) can commit any crime they want and she will always forgive them? There is no point where she will go against them. Cornelia is a good example of how twisted she is as a person. She has killed numerous people both the terrorists and the Britannian hostages in multiple occasions. She even views numbers as sub-human. She is the last person that can tell Lelouch anything for his actions.

It just feels like the story is moving forward by having the characters hold hands and sing kumbaya to get rid of their negative feelings. Lelouch held on to his anger and hatred when his mother was killed, when he believed Nunnally had died after killing his parents he had a burning hatred for Suzaku. There is no way that I can believe he would let go of his negative thoughts and opinions just like that.

He is a master actor so maybe its just him pretending to be okay and only showing his true face to Jeremiah.
Ultimate Luck Aizen chapter 2 . 7/27
A bit of grammar error on
'asked nore questions'
To
'asked more questions'
Ultimate Luck Aizen chapter 3 . 7/27
Thanks for the chapter and it seems like the first that people went back in time and watch the truth. Also hope you continue this.
Gilgamesh chapter 2 . 7/25
I'll be waiting for the next chap
Dewa1990 chapter 3 . 7/27
Excellent update, bruh. Looking forward to the next one. Also, for the love of all things sacred, please do NOT make this a harem story. Please.
MMM chapter 2 . 7/22
huh, so the people in lelouch life time travel at various period ?

oh man, this is cluster****** or not. among code geass fic, i am more likes of student council centric, but with how rare they are.
Shadowsought chapter 2 . 7/24
A few questions as the story begins properly. First, what is the status of Naoto Kozuki? Has his death already or still coming up? If the latter, what, if anything, does Kallen (among several likely people) intend to do about it? Second, CC is currently being held by Clovis' band of scientists as they conduct their ... research. Unlike last time, those involved know just what is in the container. How will they react?

Nunnally is able to walk now, however briefly? I don't recall that being a result of Charles' geass.
(It is your story and I could easily have missed something. Feel free to say so.)

Also, please remember that the relationships between people in the original timeline could make working together now interesting. Just what will Jeremiah tell Clovis if he as asked where he and Viletta ran off to as an offhand example. Somehow, wanting to chat with Lelouch and Nunnelly or discuss matters of mutual interest with 'Eleven rebels' strikes me as... slightly risky?

I look forward to future episodes.
Arthas Potter chapter 2 . 7/22
Looks fun can't wait for more!
Ghostly chapter 1 . 7/14
When I first saw the story from the title & short summary say, my guess is the people who were close or knew Lelouch were the ones sent back. After finding out about the Zero Requiem and possibly his hardships he has gone through, they would try to save him from death but they may want to do it in their own ways. That’s I first thought when I read the title & summary.
GRPF chapter 1 . 7/16
It's fine I guess, I've read a lot of takes on the ending scene that I don't really know what to say, we'll just have to see. I curious to see what type of time travel is this, instead of Lelouch will it be multiple other characters physically traveling through time or just their consciousness.

It should be magazine instead of clip, I know it's a small detail but it just really bothers me.
Evergone the Great chapter 1 . 7/14
It’s good, but if this is a time travel fic, it would have been better if the time travel happens in the first chapter.

Like, at the end... you could have wrote something like... “That was when he opened his eyes and saw a scene for long ago.”
Qrow454 chapter 1 . 7/14
Please, don't make this one of those fics where Lelouch acts like everything was his fault and want to atone. Yes, he is guilty of many things, but other people have their share of skeletons on the closet.
Cornelia has killed thousands or dozen thousands people while conquering countries.
Nunnally killed everyone who was in Pendragon, including most her half siblings, also every soldier killed by Freia.
Suzaku gained the moniker of the white death by being a monster in the European Battlefront while Lelouch was brainwashed, thanks to him.
In most fics he forgive the black knights and acts more open. I think his problem was to not having taken geass measures in case of betrayal. Like a sleeping command were his men to betray him.