You've reposted the same chapter, if this is meant to be a revised chapter 2 please mark it down at the top of the page

Get yourself a beta reader ASAP

I can immediately tell that this was written by a kid. If I were to guess, maybe you're 7-9 years old?

I like the story but can you also make Naruto study fuinjutsu and not learn everything in like a week or a year?

Nice start! Looks like a promising story, and I would love to read more