I love this story, can't wait to find out what's going to happen

In spite of the way it is written, and in spite of the disturbing ending, I can say that you did a good job.

So, are all six versions of Mira pregnant with Affe’s children or is only the main Mira having Baby Broly?

While not shown,I think Mira would have collected enough demons for everyone in the village to get a broken off soul.

Anyway, this was a fun read. Looking forward to seeing what you do next.

Anyway, I really liked this story. Do you make an alternate ending, where Mira would have won against Affe. See one or two epilogue (s)?

(original) En tout cas, j'ai bien aimé cette histoire. Pensez-vous faire une fin alternative, où Mira aurait gagné contre Affe. Voir un ou deux épilogue(s) ?

My my i thought for sure she'd be fine. Very well done my friend

I will admit, this fanfic is...well I don't really know what to say. The lemon is nice and reading about Mira slowly succumbing to desires is cool, but I don't really like . Aside from that, I think it's pretty okay.
P.S. Sorry that you got a review from DoomMarine55. The guy is a bad author who believes that he is the best author, doesn't listen to criticism and tells anyone who writes rape to commit suicide. He is basically a horrible human being and it is made worse because he is proud of the fact that he cyber bullies people.

Hi!

This story are really good, it's exactly what I was looking for. I must to recognize that the strong (and gorgeous) woman being kneeling down by her own desires is my thing, and you guys are the best in that between everyone i see in fanfiction until now. I will say no more but i looking for the continuation of this excellent story.

¡Un saludo! (good bye!)

Gotta say, I’m a bit disappointed in the route this story is going. I was expecting a Stepford wives kinda transformation.

Natsu as a vulcan hahaha a pink vulcan

What if natsu was posess by a vulcan would he fuck every girl he meets or just one

I wish I could say I was surprised by the ending but I wasn't. Let's see what happens

Kill yourself.

I knew it! I knew they were Vulcans!

Loved seeing how slutty Mira got.

I’m a bit surprised the handsy guards didn’t get any fun in this.

I dont know if either you. Or Natsu is Awesome is german but if not I think its funny that you chose Affe as name for your OC cause that is the German word for Monkey.
I personally find it always a little bit distracting when in an English story are random german words xD.
But still awesome story like always.

i love this story i hope to see more