Awesome story,
Please update this again soon

I like the premise so far, I'm definitely interested to see where it goes next. Really I only have one critique:I feel like Zoe is a little too attached to Percy. I'm totally down for PerZoe, but it's weird that Zoe went from telling Artemis that Percy had a crush on Annabethand may have even been in love with herin one scene to going on a mini-rant about how Percy should be happy that Annabeth was dead instead of her in the next.

Still, overall a great start to the story, can't wait for the next chapter! Especially if it clears up how close Zoe feels with Percy

Great

this is weird, im pretty sure i have already read this exact fic, yet it says it was just published?

Good start can’t wait to see were it goes

Interesting start, I look forward to seeing the direction this will go. Oh and towards the middle you accidentally used the word 'life' instead of lift and had thrown a 'the' that wasn't needed in the sentence. But besides that everything flowed really well.

This is a great story, are you going to continue on this

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