Reviews for Arcane Craftsman Jaune Arc
Kyuubi-Titan chapter 5 . 4h
Now thats an interesting power gap closer. Looking forward to more leveling and crafting goodness.
TichePotato chapter 5 . 8h
Wow, that was really anime. And not in a good way either.
Devilmaycry17 chapter 5 . 9h
A good fic. Try to keep the drops and skills in moderation as it will quickly become over leveling instead of solo leveling. The plot is good but if you plan on making this a proper extended masterpiece which I hope you do, then make sure that Jaune doesn't get too lucky or too OP early on. Character development requires hardships and while he has faced a significant amount of them during his childhood, it would be detrimental if he just got insanely lucky or plot armored everytime.
Again, a very good job. I've read and enjoyed both solo leveling and Forged Destiny and your take and variations on these are quite interesting to say the least. Hope it develops beautifully.
authoritrash chapter 1 . 10h
This is take straight from “Solo Leveling” isn’t it? I dig it tho, you’ve brought it over pretty well. Keep it up.
Nice chapter 5 . 12h
interesting but this needs more character dialogues and slow down on the story it feels kind of rushed.
More.more chapter 5 . 12h
2 chapters in few days. I love it keep up a great work. Can't wait for Jaune to use Arzyk Dagger (A Rank) daggers like Solo leveling...wait if he receive A-rank weapons aren't those weapons extremely valuable? You wrote getting a B-ranks are extremely rare and hard to find (even no other black Smith created one) so then he is very lucky to have one (it will be stupid for him to hand it over or sell it). Lastly, I want to see Jaune to go solo on dungeon by himself later on.

Well good luck and keep up a great work
ZeroX1999 chapter 5 . 13h
This is great! Like how you are using the Champion of the Gods in this fic. I can't wait to see where this goes.
The White Wulf chapter 1 . 21h
Don't know why i can't PM you but i'll post it here for everyone to see XD. THis is Fanfiction people, this story, as much as I read it, while similar to mine is distinct. We both use the same source material for our story but have gone different directions with it as far as I can tell. So unless we copy each others storylines (Which i can tell is not going to happen) there's no issue. So Striker 777 keep on writing, don't worry about reviews saying you're a copy of me, or anyone else's story. (Unless you do copy entire story arcs in which case sucks to be you XD).
Kyuubi-Titan chapter 4 . 7/29
I really enjoy the LitRPG genre, and find this a worthy entry. I had to read all 4 chapters first. Really looking forward to more.
Still thinking on a username chapter 4 . 7/29
I love this crossover so I'm hyped up for the next chapters but I feel like two things could be better.

Pacing is a little too fast.
Dialogue feels forced to me.
Cherickson chapter 4 . 7/28
I like this a lot, but should he be telling everyone about his class and how he reawakened? Seems a little silly to me.
JohnBarry chapter 4 . 7/28
I hope the boss they fight is a winged Deathstalker. That would be so cool. It can fly and stab you with its tail.
Unknown chapter 1 . 7/28
Seems similar to the Only I Level up manwa
Roman chapter 4 . 7/28
please contunie I am enjoying this a lot I hope this becomes a long and fun serious I want to read more and more but I keep reading to fast I guess you writing is so good I can't help but read it
Undeadhero143 chapter 4 . 7/28
one mistake, I think you meant
carryring a wand or a staff
not
carryring a sword or a staff
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