Outstanding chapter!

Great chapter! loved the belle and emma interactions, and loved that emma just went to gold and told him about neal. and when she fired a shot and hook dropped his sword? very funny.

Oooh I like this. Can't wait to see how you handle the Neal/Henry situation. Keep up the great work.

Outstanding chapter!

great chapter! i loooved the part in the beginning with emma and regina. those mature and honest talks they have are my kink. lol. and i can't wait to find out who spilled the beans about hopper and regina!

I'm loving this take on this portion of S2. I can't wait till you get to Neal coming to Storybrooke as I'm curious as to where you'll take his character. Keep it up.

Outstanding chapter.

i love this chapter so much. i love the first scene with emma and august with the morning after, finding out that Whale is Frankenstein, and then the talk with regina before going into Granny's.

Oh wow. Obviously not Regina. It's Cora. Keep up the great work.

great chapter! i liked everything emma said to henry about regina, and his father.

Awesome job. Love it.

This chapter was really good. I love your version of the nursery scene. It many ways it was much more in depth and tender than the actual version. And I liked the added scene with Regina and David. I really think the show glossed over so much of the internal feelings and nuances of these characters.

Poor Regina. I can't even IMAGINE how hard it has been for her. And poor Snow ofc. Keep it up.

oooh that last part with david and regina was great. i loved it. with david realizing just how young regina is, and everything. love it. thanks for writing that bit.

David was far more competent without Snow than you’re presenting him. You can make August important without trashing David. Eye roll.