This is very good

A cat is fine too. Though, the spider needs more love.

Hey man it's been awhile since ya last uploaded anything, are ya ok? I hope so mate. Have a good day.

btw found erotic version similar plot: Discovering a Weak Spot by NeedsDcaff

sensai write more of this glorious work this blake is best blake. it would be hilarious for next chapter when jaune is petting her ears if someone walks in and he is secretly petting her weakness! neko for the win

Was anyone else constantly scratching their head while reading this?

I'm not the only one, right?

You know considering rwby is filled with bad writing with incompetent people like Miles.. there is no reason why Jaune should of ignorant of Aura.. Jaune comes from family that normally produce powerful warriors..How could family not educate him on that

We're fighting to the more insulting that took him five volumes just to activate his semblence...really?

Will Consider making A Story... Jaune Knows How Aura Worked But He Never Had His Aura Unlocked Because None of Family Memebers are Strong and Skilled Enough To Unlock His Aura.. Why Because Jaune Have Massive Aura Reserves..

Plot with Some Smut ... but you have to do it without it ruining the story..

Did you know that Monty Oum implied that Cinder was supposed to be more of a revolutionist Villian of being sociopathic power hungry villain..

If you're familiar with Fire Emblem three houses then Cinder is Suppose to Be Like Edelgard... a Anti Villain without the professor's guidance.. however with the professor's guidance she becomes an anti Hero..

Cinder fall is not interested in terrorism but interested in Exposing Certain Truths regardless of the consequences because troops reveal themselves one way or another.

Cinder Fall is not truly loyal to Salem .. But she still somewhat respect her.. She is Aware of Salem's immortality curse at the silver eyes that could be the key.

Endgame Goals:

1: A Powerful Sliver Eyed Warrior is only one capable of purging Salem of the Grimn Essesnce and destroying the pool of Darkness... those two answers are jaune Arc Aura Amplication and Ruby Rose Sliver Eyes and Speed Semblence.

2: once the Grimm Essence is purged out of her and Pool of the darkness is destroyed... the destructive urges that come with Grimm essence should make Salem slightly more rational.

3: Cinder has To Find Way to Get Salem understand What She Did Wrong so the Curse can be lifted... As Long as Salem isolates herself she will not learn her lesson

Adorable friendship bonding. Blake's misconceptions are understandable due to staple of abusive relationships fictionalized into something romantic. It's disturbing. But ice cream girl oozing sexuality was one statement Blake got right. Neo be hot yo.

Mallobaude; are you done with writing? pleeease finish "my abominable monster classmates..." It's one of your more popular works and near the end

At first this was a lemon or lime story, then it turns out to be a Bait & Switch story about cutsy Cat Girl being a cat. It was nice. :)

Hey. I read the description and went in suspicious it wasn't pure sex story. Nice one. hehe. Though I thought it'd be non-stop Blake making innuendo then getting mad at Jaune. But her shipping Cardin?!
And I read your profile update. Yeah, take time. Don't try to force inspiration and creativity. Quality suffers if you do.

This is amazing. Looking forward to next part.

Do a maria calavera fic

Blake makes a good point.

Thats exactly why you should do Jaune x Cinder. C'mon how have you not done them yet?

Arc Furnace/Knight Fall is a great ship dammit!

Weaboo ninja cat Blake is canon to me.