| Reviews for Damn that man |
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   Aqualeah chapter 7 . 10/9/2009 Good story. I can't wait to read more. |
| fiercemyass chapter 7 . 5/15/2009 This is awesome. :) Update soon! :) |
| BridgetAG chapter 7 . 3/8/2009 Please Please Please Update. This stories soo Good! |
| CAiro.3 chapter 1 . 8/14/2007 Very nice I was wanting to know if you cared to help me write a story send me an e-mail |
| Rukia247 chapter 7 . 6/4/2007 well, it wasn't what i thought it'll be, but it's so much better, plz keep on going! |
| blissful trinity chapter 7 . 5/14/2007 trowa is so sweet. i hope that relena & heero can solve things. but i dont know if talking will help..anyways good luck |
| babegalanime chapter 7 . 4/27/2007 continue plz. |
| LoVe23 chapter 7 . 4/15/2007 I loved this! YAY Trowa! :) Can't wait to read more! |
| AnimeBabe90 chapter 7 . 4/9/2007 I love this story so far, i just wish your chapters were longer! but I'M SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED! YAY! |
| blissful trinity chapter 6 . 4/7/2007 oh how sexy. i love the trowa x relena pairing but this is a heero/relena fic. using trowa to make him jealous.. how easy it seems. he's already flaring up in anger.. LOL update soon ) |
| tiff c chapter 6 . 3/25/2007 PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| melodie chapter 6 . 12/13/2006 interesting story you have here... |
| Something Dysfunctional chapter 6 . 12/2/2006 *twitch* Why did ya stop there? *throws tantrum* You MUST hurry with the next chapter! It's just too good to miss out on. :) Normally, I am a Heero/Duo fan, but secretly... Heero/Relena are STILL my no. 1. Buahahaha. |
| smile and be happy chapter 6 . 11/24/2006 it was so short no u got to make em longer but i love |
| Food for thought chapter 6 . 11/23/2006 The story isnt' bad, if only you would infuse it with some depth. I find some of your chapters ridiciously short and really making no sense. Heero is acting like a total abusive SOB, I mean I really hate him... If you put him back with Relena, this story would take a horrid ugly turn. Perhaps you tried to make him into the guy we love to hate... but it's really not working for me. You're not a bad writer, but you need to connect and developed your ideas further, making it meaningful and not cliche. Relena is a mary sue and Heero... well you've heard my thoughts on him. Characterizations are something else you need to work on. Please take this as constructive criticism instead of flame. Oh, and make sure to get a beta as well, I believe a good beta would do you a world of good, make you questions your words and where your story is going, because your narrative or your writting style is that bad, only the developtment of the plot. |
