*Deep Sigh* Lovely. My heart hurts a bit now.
You know, this sort of sounds like the movie verion of Utena and Anthy, for some reason.
Just a random observation.

That was beautiful two...I read the Anthy POV, and loved it...now I love this one. My God you are a wonderful poet. You truly are. A round of applause goes out to you. Please write more.

Hi. Yeah, it's me again... Always with these ideas! I wish I were so creative XD I guess I should start reading deep books and start thinking deep thoughts and paint more and invite The Crazy Thing over every day so that we can further our plans for Triangle Square...anyway! Yay for this one...awesome work. Great repitition, imagery, and eye-catching title. Kudos to you a million times over...

I loved this one... It was incredibly touching! Just... Wow it really touched me, I enjoyed what you did with this!

Fantastic, as usual. I don't have to much to say. Just general praise.

I like the main repetition. The redundancy of some of the other parts got to be a little much at times but for the most part was fine. I truly like the very last line. The title is fabulous as well. It brings very interesting imagery to mind. Nice job, as usual, as always.

Nice poem. I have to admit. I don't read much poetry, but I decided on a change of pace today, and your poem was so romantic-oh yeah. Anyway nice job.

Peace out 5-thousand

Keiko-chan