Reviews for A Long Walk to Forever
Shinju47 chapter 1 . 4/19/2018
I love it!
Rupert Bear chapter 1 . 8/24/2014
Beautifully written, thank you for sharing your story.
Phanma chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
This was SO beautiful... I loved it.
Fantasiestucke chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
I just love this! I remember reading this for the first time sooo long ago and adoring it. I just rediscovered it and find it just as delightful!
BirchTreeWoman chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Wow, that was really, really beautiful. :) Just wow. Simple but beautiful.
eBooeBoo chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
Loved it! Very unique writing style that was entirely enjoyable. Kudos to you!
Scarlett Raine chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
This is so cute!

"One foot in front of the other—through leaves, over bridges,"

LOL.
MusicalMaryann chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
Haha, quirky and cool. Well done.
070 chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
I read this a while ago and for some reason never bothered reviewing! Silly me, I know. Let me just tell you how much I love this! The style is refreshingly simple, and the dialogue, the banter between them... it just catches you by surprise. It's so simple, and I think that's what's so magical about it. Heh. Adorable :D
Adi Sagestar chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Wow... you somehow use a writing style that I can only say is quite akin to Douglas Adams, and make it work with Phantom of the Opera.

And they said it couldn't be done.

Lovely story. I love all of of it, but mostly that it's E/C and isn't fraught with tension and drama.

They also said that couldn't be done, unless it was an AU.

You seem to be a miracle worker.

- Adi
MadLizzy chapter 1 . 3/24/2007
While I love the idea, it is not an original work - even by the loose standards of fan fiction. I guiltily enjoyed it until I realized that it was almost verbatim Vonnegut's "A Long Walk to Forever".

The sad fact is, however well-intentioned, your "A Long Walk to Forever" casts doubt on the originality of your other work. I'd strongly recommend that you pull this story.

You're a fine person and a fine writer: You don't need this in your bibliography.

ML
phantom-jedi1 chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
A rather...different piece. I may have to look up the mentioned story.

Good work!

phantom_jedi
EscaPhan225 chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
this is soo sweet
dark-hearted rose chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
aww! how adorable. and I love Vonnegut...I shall have to read that story now... *goes off to find the story*

war regards,

dark-hearted rose
carrie butler chapter 1 . 2/1/2007
I've read this story over and over and fall in love with it more each time. You did a wonderful job with this!
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