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   amarauder'swife chapter 23 . 1/9/2019 SKSKSKSKSKSKSK GO ON THIS IS BEAUTIFUL |
| amarauder'swife chapter 12 . 1/8/2019 YES HE SHOULD BE JAMES POTTER AND YOU SHOULD BE LILY POTTER i just realised how weird i sound shouting at a fiction character in a bloody fan fiction excuse my mental illnesses please thanks |
| amarauder'swife chapter 11 . 1/8/2019 YEA THEY DID WHOO HOOOO JILY ALL DA WAE |
| amarauder'swife chapter 7 . 1/8/2019 LILY ACCEPT IT HE JUST ISN'T BOYFRIEND MATERIAL FRIEND MATERIAL- SURE JUST NOT BOYFRIEND STUFF |
| amarauder'swife chapter 6 . 1/8/2019 SKSKSKKSK THE UNIVERSE IS GETTING BALANCED AGAIN |
| amarauder'swife chapter 5 . 1/8/2019 nO LILY THERE ARE SO MANY REASONS WHY THIS CANNOT HAPPEN THE COSMOS IS AGAINST IT SIRIUS IS GAY FOR REMUS AND LILY LOVES JAMES SEE IT CAN'T HAPPEN NOW LILY DEAR WAKE UP |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2018 I absolutely love the names marilin Ohara ans Scarlett monroe. It's Scarlett ohara and Marilyn Monroe |
| Padfoot the second chapter 23 . 5/17/2018 Are you going to continue this story because I have read it a few times through now and I NEED to know what happens next |
| Dontforgettobreathe chapter 5 . 6/13/2016 I love your story, I really do. But the first time you had Sirius coming to Lily's door, I thought it was just a lapse of memory. But then you did it a second time. I just want you to know that Sirius can't just walk up to their door there's a slide that will come out of the floor and slide him back down. Perhaps you might've already known this and just took it out for story sake. And that's okay if you did I just wanted to remind you. And also I love how you have Lily going out with Sirius first but then she goes out with James Potter but she does seem a little too much of a giggly girl and less of a smart girl. But other than that I think the story is absolutely lovely. Great first story! |
| Guest chapter 23 . 2/21/2016 I think u forgot about this cuz u left it un-ended in 2006 and its 2016. Please continue writing |
| Hermione Granger 123789 chapter 23 . 12/16/2015 I want a proper ending please, it is a great story... |
| notyourbusiness chapter 23 . 2/7/2015 omg. YOU LEFT ME HANGING! GRRRR |
| Someone chapter 23 . 1/25/2015 NOOOO WHY IS IT OVER MAKE MORE UPDATES PLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASE THIS IS AMAZING I WANT MORE |
| writingfornights chapter 23 . 8/9/2014 This is the last chapter you posted an you haven't update in years and I'm just gonna go cry in a corner now. x Cindy |
| writingfornights chapter 21 . 8/9/2014 I just wanna cry this is so cute x Cindy |
