This story...it's as if it was written by a profesional writer! Congrats! Maybe you have a future as a writer, consider it! The story is great!

...beautiful...

Very nice second chapter.

Great chapter. On to chapter two.

it was great and all *hugs & kisses*

but i have one question: Usagi's gone?

i have to say great story i really loved itt

i loved it, and don't mind the harpies complaning about your grammer and work usage, english if my first launage and i still mess it up. i'd love to see one of them try to translate a story into your maothe launage and see how well it come out. lol. XoXoXoX Aire

ok, i'm glad that i finally got a chance to read this. i was so happy at the end! (well, not exactly happy, but as happy as you CAN be at the end of a drama fic, lol) you did a great job, with how usagi changed and all (in all reality, that is probably the best way of her becoming neo-queen serenity, if it was shown or whatever... i mean, change-wise and all) you how no idea how, well, EXCITED i was when chibi-usa came back, awesome story

*starts singing continuously* o happy day! o happy day! i'm so glad everything's basically normal and just fine and dandy and *rambles on a bit more* awesome story. can't wait to see chibiusa, and how mamoru and usagi are going to take seeing each other (alive, no less... ok, bad sorta-joke, i know) hope you continue soon, awesome job

I just wanted to let you know that I love your fanfic! I read it all in one sitting and I cannot wait to read more. I do not understand how some can say the plot is over-used; I've never seen it, and I read a lot of Sailor Moon fanfiction. Keep up the good work, and for what it's worth, your English is better than some writers I have seen of that were raised in the States.

Love and Light,

SeleneStarr

To say that I was surpised at your response would be an understatement. I see you have matured a lot, and I'm really glad that you decided to maturely handle it. I'm sure you were angry again after seeing my review, but instead of lashing out you handled it in a very sophisticated way. And I thank you for that.

As for hurting your pride, I admit, I should not have been harsh. But honestly...I don't remember being harsh...I'm sure I gave constructive criticism, I could be wrong though. I know how you feel, however. I got soo many flames under my name Bunny Winner and I felt so horrible and angry. Believe me, I have the worst temper. I just wanted to lash out at everyone. Omygod, it was terrible. But then I realized, if I don't listen to these "flamers" I might never improve my writing. As much as they had no right to criticize me, I did want to improve. But anyways, enough about me.

So, I finally took time to read the rest of your stories. I was surprised as how well-written they were. They're a lot better than what I had read before. And I just read that English is not your mother tounge. I understand it's hard to learn English, especially if you live somewhere else. I speak from exprience. I moved to the US when I was 6 or 7, app. 8 years ago and even though I had been learning English in my home country in a private school, I had a very very difficult time here.

I hope you do take the crticism ppl give you though, and I'm sure you'll continue to produce excellent stories. Good luck :)

Hugz .n. Kisses

Angel

Cool Story! Keep up the good work!

i'm glad that quite a few of the problems have been fixed. awesome job so far. well, now usagi has a better chance top be happy. but what about chibi-usa? i can't wiat until you continue... thoguh i can't believe this is almost over. terrific story

Okay, you seriously think your plot was freaking original? You may have been reading stories on ...congratulations! But that doesn't make you an expert. When people review you have no right to lash out at them in the next chapter, if people do give you constructive criticism, it's to help your writing. When I started writing, I got plenty of flames but I took all that advice and actually started writing stories that were actually original, stories I could call my own. And omg I wasn't even mean to you in my other review. I was very very nice, I can be a bitch when I want to. So the next time you get criticism, actually take it and use it.

And the next time you want to respond to a review like that instead of making it public and responding in your next chapter, e-mail the author or leave them a review asking for their e-mail.

Hugz .n. kisses

Angel

I like the story. I like your plot, but I'm very confused..

Well hope you update soon! Best of luck!

-Urmi-