Reviews for What if it wasn't
Guest chapter 3 . 12/28/2016
OMG
I could actually feel my heart tearing itself into pieces on chapter 2
Sabrina Potter-Black chapter 4 . 5/13/2013
Dog son WTF
Navaka114 chapter 2 . 1/8/2012
Nice reason for Sirius breaking out, just like before in Book 3 that he broke out because he knew that Peter Pettigrew was at hogwarts with Harry and that made him risk his life and soul to get past the dementors to Harry. Nice!
Child of Dreams chapter 15 . 12/25/2011
SIRIUS ORION BLACK! HOW DARE YOU BE SO MEAN TO MY REMUS!

IT'S NOT HIS FAULT HE DIDN'T BELIEVE YOU WERE INNOCENT!

BLAME WORMTAIL, THE KING OF TRAITORS!

ACTUALLY, IT'S PARTLY YOUR FAULT, TOO!

IF YOU HAD TOLD DUMBLEDORE ABOUT THE SWITCH IMMEDIATELY AFTER JAMES AND LILY WERE KILLED, INSTEAD OF ACTING LIKE A FOOL AND CHASING AFTER THAT RAT BASTARD, WORMTAIL, YOU WOULDN'T HAVE GONE TO AZKABAN IN THE FIRST PLACE AND POOR HARRY WOULDN'T HAVE BEEN ABUSED FOR THE LAST FIVE BLOODY YEARS!

YOU APOLOGIZE TO POOR REMUS THIS INSTANT, OR I WILL TAKE YOU OVER MY KNEE AND INTRODUCE YOUR BACKSIDE TO MY MOM'S WOODEN SPOON!

P.S. I MAY ONLY BE 18 YEARS OLD, SIRIUS ORION BLACK,

BUT I MEAN IT! IF YOU DON'T APOLOGIZE TO MY REMUS RIGHT THIS SECOND, YOUR BACKSIDE WILL BE MEETING MY MOM'S WOODEN SPOON!

AND WHEN I'M FINISHED WITH THE SPOON, YOU WON'T BE SITTING COMFORTABLY FOR A YEAR!
Katie Bowen chapter 7 . 4/23/2011
Sirius' full name is "Sirius Orion Black".

Remus' full name is "Remus John Lupin".

Harry's full name is "Harry James Potter".

And everyone already knows that Dumbledore's full name is

"Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore".
Katie Bowen chapter 7 . 4/23/2011
The word for someone who is really tired is "exhaustion".

And it is spelled

"E-X-H-A-U-S-T-I-O-N"
V. L. Crawford chapter 24 . 1/11/2011
Well you definitely left this story at a strange point. I hope you finish it someday.
V. L. Crawford chapter 20 . 1/11/2011
Thank God. I didn't want Sirius mad at Remus.
V. L. Crawford chapter 14 . 1/11/2011
Thank God!
V. L. Crawford chapter 11 . 1/11/2011
This is so heartbreaking.
V. L. Crawford chapter 5 . 1/11/2011
Thank God Sirius came.
V. L. Crawford chapter 4 . 1/11/2011
This was great.
V. L. Crawford chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
I really hate the Dursleys.
Cassandra30 chapter 24 . 1/19/2010
The truth! Sirius, jumping to those conclusions hurts people again.
Cassandra30 chapter 23 . 1/19/2010
Good chapter.
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