Reviews for Five Things that Never Happened to Dawn
creativesm75 chapter 5 . 5/27/2017
very good
Amanthya chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
It's amazing how much more I'd like Dawn if she were Faith's sister instead of Buffy's. When she's Buffy's, I like her about as much as focus-stealing, incest-wanting Chibi-Usa of Sailor Moon; which is to say, not at all.

And having family, even manufactured, would've done so much for Faith. : (
DeepBlueJoy chapter 5 . 6/3/2014
Yes, it would have been exactly like that.
DeepBlueJoy chapter 4 . 6/3/2014
That's even a worse betrayal than throwing her out of her house. From both of them. And they all die.
DeepBlueJoy chapter 3 . 6/3/2014
that is scary.
DeepBlueJoy chapter 2 . 6/3/2014
Dark and powerful. thank you.
DeepBlueJoy chapter 1 . 6/3/2014
Sweet!
Luna del Cielo chapter 5 . 4/19/2010
Dawn gives him a good approximation of the look she bestowed on Spike when he came back, and Mac doesn't try to talk to her again.

-NICE description

Very beautiful last chapter. Thank you for sharing.
Luna del Cielo chapter 4 . 4/19/2010
Hot DAMN this was good. Wow. Stunning, unexpected, brilliant- and more. You are an amazing writer!
Luna del Cielo chapter 3 . 4/19/2010
Oh, everything." Buffy stretched luxuriously again. "First of all, there are a few geeks who need to be taught a lesson on what real villains are. Then there's Tara-wanna turn her, Dawnie? She put up with enough crap from Willow. I kinda feel sorry for her."

"Yes! Yay!" Dawn bounced and clapped.

"Maybe Anya, too, for putting up with Xander," suggested Spike.

- I love chipper Vamp Dawn!And yay for turning Tara & Anya!

Wow, crazy. Crazy good, that is :D
Luna del Cielo chapter 2 . 4/19/2010
Beautiful. Tear jerking, even
Luna del Cielo chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
AW LOVE this!
Jinxgirl chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
ha too bad that didn't happen, I think Dawn and Faith as sisters would be cute.
Her Name Was Tamora chapter 3 . 4/21/2008
*grins evilly* nice. :D

I kinda wanna read this chapter as a full story. That'd be amazing...

-Tamora, the Cardboard Moon
WhatWeDo chapter 5 . 4/17/2007
I never considered that they might have given Dawn to Faith, as that slayer's sister.

"That Buffy had chosen her death, as she'd never chosen her life." - This sentence is perfect. Ultimate perfection. I bow down to this sentence.

And another perfect sentence is: "Good old Sunnydale. You know, I don't think they ever really appreciated me here."

The Junior Watcher chapter was so sad!

Wow, you really explored different possibilities! You're very creative. I love the wording of 'buried by the earth and sea.' So sad. But then, you make everything alright. And I love you for it.

This is really wonderful writing.

- Jessica

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