Oh and also, I totally believe the baddie is Dorian.
Fun fact: ironically, out of all their stories the only one I have read is of J&H.

THIS IS FANTASTIC! Oh do please continue! What must I do? I'm not above bribery!

It has been a while since I've seen this, it's unfortunate that most of the big unfinished stories never got finished because the authors became busy or some other reason. This story has been enjoyable to read again. I really like how you portray the League characters. Poor Henry, he just can't get a break from his internal struggle.

I seriously distrust that Joan, and I have a good feeling who the mysterious man is.

On other notes I think deep down Mina enjoys some of the verbal sparing with Henry.

The REAL original invisible man was JACK griffen, The makers used Hawley because that was the name of a murderer in the states around that time. And Rodney is Rodney because FOX could not get rites on the character SAVVY?

Freaking brillient my freaky darling... love it!

ha! Joan is cute! and bubbly, like you said. not a mary sue! GREAT! *standing ovation*

Hm... MORE!

awsome so poor jekyll*goes cross eyed8
ah!must...stop..reading!sympathy...overriding...evilness!*is suddenly in a poofy pink dress and looks all cheery*oh! oh! oh! it is so sweet of you to make that jekyll/joan pairing!*hops up and down and squeels*

*chokes/gasps*painting...dorian...trator...revenge?*faints

*huge grin*finally someone remembered that crud was a red color

AHA!I KNEW IT!*calms down*just don't make it a *shudder*mary sue...

PIZZA PARTY! This chapter was so great. Tom thinking the pizza looked like a wheel. I laughed.
Loved the Jekyll/Hyde drama. Joan is being so sweet with him.
Can't wait for next chapter.

YEAH! JEKYLL IS BETTER! But, gr, don't trust Joan. Growl, keep away from him! He's MIna's! Or, mine! But, really good fic! This is a seriously nice fic you got coming along! Sweet

Sorry for not deigning to notice this fanfiction earlier- it has been and exciting read, on my part. Oh, by this chapter, I'm guessing that the certain man, is Dorian, and Mina still has lingering feelings, or at least, that is what I am guessing. However, I would like for once to see that Dorian's best intentions are not to betray Mina. Can't wait for the next chapter- will there be a Mina/Dorian pairing? Adieu!
~Enduro

can't wait to read more,please update as soon as possible