Please update Please

Continue! Continue! :P I like the story so far, and I really want to see them escape Manticore

OMG I LOVE IT!

Both confessions was perfect! Max & Alec are perfect together D

I love how it ended but I would love to see them escape and living together happily D

LOVE THIS! Definitely fantastic alterations to the whole Berrisford case.

I love the reunion!

But I wish Alec didn't pull away.

LOVE THIS!

I can't believe, the moment is about to come!

I feel so bad for Max, Zack must have truly loved her

Poor Alec!

I love the take on 510 (Biggs right?) insight on Alec's return.

You're gonna have her get captured again, aren't you? I hope Alec never forgets and fights Psy-Ops!

Amazing story D

They need to reunite!

Glad to hear about Mr. B!

Poor Alec but at least he hasn't forgotten D

I love Max's realization D

What happened to the mystery caller for both Max & Alec?

At least Alec is still thinking about Max D

How's Mr. Berrisford?

OMG! You jumped ahead? Will they be reunited once again? I hate wondering but I love this story

Great job!

LOVE the alteration D

Love this story!

OMG! I'm guessing the caller is Sandeman now with that little tidbit!

He has to tell her now!

OMG Poor Max! Alec should have said it!

I love this version better instead of with the original Rachel.

Max & Alec are perfect for each other!

Oh I LOVE THAT! Truly a fantasy that I wish I was in Max's shoes. Excellent job!

Love Max & Alec together D

That was so sweet! That moment between them and the naming D Will Max ever tell Alec that she knows who he is?